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'Internal Whispers'
How like the sun
It's intentful wish
to warm...
and as the mountains
that reach up high,
standing strong
'gainst the storm...
yet, just like a wind
gusts just begun
that blows air-fresh
a longing to be
your only one...
So like the river,
swept up in
a currents' rush
and to feel
the green of grass
so plush...
here's a hope, a wish
delivered
you'd accept the heart
of thee, a giver...
Though it appears
you're naught to sigh
whether thine soul
were purged of pain,
still, gifted a love
that set you free to fly...
It's intentful wish
to warm...
and as the mountains
that reach up high,
standing strong
'gainst the storm...
yet, just like a wind
gusts just begun
that blows air-fresh
a longing to be
your only one...
So like the river,
swept up in
a currents' rush
and to feel
the green of grass
so plush...
here's a hope, a wish
delivered
you'd accept the heart
of thee, a giver...
Though it appears
you're naught to sigh
whether thine soul
were purged of pain,
still, gifted a love
that set you free to fly...
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re: Re: 'Internal Whispers'
4th Sep 2014 11:25am
Thank you my sweetness, I felt I needed to "lift" my own spirits
n somehow this was born :) pleased you liked... :)
n somehow this was born :) pleased you liked... :)
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4th Sep 2014 7:26am
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4th Sep 2014 11:26am
Aaaawwww I like how you that! lol
thank you my friend, appreciate you... :)
thank you my friend, appreciate you... :)
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4th Sep 2014 9:05am
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4th Sep 2014 11:27am
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4th Sep 2014 1:55pm
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4th Sep 2014 2:06pm
Aaaawwww thank you Grace! I'm pleased you enjoyed. My ink...thank you so much :)
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4th Sep 2014 8:44pm
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4th Sep 2014 11:28pm
Aaaawwww thank my sweet lady... I'm happy you enjoyed
n truly appreciate your support :)
n truly appreciate your support :)
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5th Sep 2014 3:44pm
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5th Sep 2014 7:52pm
Thank you my dear! I'm happy it made you smile :)
Appreciate your continued support always :)
Appreciate your continued support always :)
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5th Sep 2014 6:03pm
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5th Sep 2014 7:53pm
My sweet one... Thank u for yet another visit n leaving another sweet thought! Mum forever grateful for ur support :)
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5th Sep 2014 10:27pm
Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
I've come by again and again, read this poem of yours countless times, and pondered its meaning long and long.
What a gift of special grace and tender love you bestow upon someone gloriously blessed indeed. :-*
I've come by again and again, read this poem of yours countless times, and pondered its meaning long and long.
What a gift of special grace and tender love you bestow upon someone gloriously blessed indeed. :-*
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re: Re: 'Internal Whispers'
6th Sep 2014 3:49am
Aaaawwww are u a true sweetheart! Thank you
I'm blushing big time! truly appreciate u n ur undying support :)
I'm blushing big time! truly appreciate u n ur undying support :)
Re: 'Internal Whispers'
6th Sep 2014 2:09pm
Soothing to the soul, calming to the mind
Such a tranquil setting you have gifted
From a storm that it was made. Shows your true strength and beliefs, and we felt it . awesome write
Such a tranquil setting you have gifted
From a storm that it was made. Shows your true strength and beliefs, and we felt it . awesome write
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re: Re: 'Internal Whispers'
6th Sep 2014 2:45pm
My friend, I'm honored by your words n deeply appreciate your continued support... Can't leave out humbled as well :)
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6th Sep 2014 7:51pm
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7th Sep 2014 1:48am
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7th Sep 2014 11:32am
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7th Sep 2014 12:23pm
Aaawww hi stranger! :) I make look easy- I do?
Wow, that's so sweet of you... I'm not sure how
to say it without sounding conceited, but
If it looks easy, it's because it just comes
on it's own, I truly don't labor over my thoughts
when the itch to write comes... Thank u tons
lady :)
Wow, that's so sweet of you... I'm not sure how
to say it without sounding conceited, but
If it looks easy, it's because it just comes
on it's own, I truly don't labor over my thoughts
when the itch to write comes... Thank u tons
lady :)
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7th Sep 2014 11:30pm
I so should hang out here more..twirl twirl...the things I could learn..sigh..
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8th Sep 2014 00:42am
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re: Re: 'Internal Whispers'
8th Sep 2014 6:12pm
Thank you my sweet one, sighin from you is always a huge compliment :) appreciate u mami... ;)