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Leaving Some Distance
Combing acrobats
spin their cycles
each
in revolution
graduating
tighter, higher
I come undone
with tense bated breath
pressed in
puncturing myself
As watchers in weeds
snap shots
of this mess
breathing out...
societies beg for running away
while lights
white hot get brighter
burning secure retinas
deep within
seeing endless meld
curls me
indifferent
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6reZcwSZSA
spin their cycles
each
in revolution
graduating
tighter, higher
I come undone
with tense bated breath
pressed in
puncturing myself
As watchers in weeds
snap shots
of this mess
breathing out...
societies beg for running away
while lights
white hot get brighter
burning secure retinas
deep within
seeing endless meld
curls me
indifferent
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6reZcwSZSA
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re: Re: Leaving Some Distance
5th Sep 2014 4:12pm
It is similar to that feeling im sure...either way...it's paranoia of general society and the need for withdraw--sophisticated she says HA -don't make me break out the dick and fart jokes :)
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Re: Leaving Some Distance
4th Sep 2014 4:27am
remaining indifferent to the acrobatics, the bright lights, the madness of society, is a skill in itself...
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re: Re: Leaving Some Distance
5th Sep 2014 4:13pm
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5th Sep 2014 4:14pm
Re: Leaving Some Distance
4th Sep 2014 10:48pm
Interesting read Soul reminds me of colours flashing when you close your eyes or being curled within yourself far from the madding crowd.
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re: Re: Leaving Some Distance
5th Sep 2014 4:17pm
Exactly-and very akin to the paranoia caused by LSD...making You very aware of the public very aware of the self and attune to a rooms energy...this shakes the minds defense mode for want of camouflage-Thanks for the read Dear Grace!!!
re: re: Re: Leaving Some Distance
6th Sep 2014 11:14pm
I heard about the LSD effects. Must be scary though because there is always that need to embrace that cocoon and look at the world from within and not actually live it.
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7th Sep 2014 00:44am
It can be that way for in society.
But in a natural setting (Woods,waterfalls etc) or controlled environment that breathes safety-such as a home...it was a very giving drug ....in the way of mind expansion and ways to think or look upon things...the simplest things would show the beauty of themselves.
Todays lsd is much different from days past....and scary.
the main reason for most visuals attuned to it was your pupils dilate and become big as saucers letting in all surrounding light.
imagine seeing in a forest of pitch black....never fearing to fall or stumble because all can be seen...I use to run as fast as I could through the forests at such times...weaving in and around the trees splashing in streams-Wrote a lot of fun music with friends too...sadly my body changed as I grew older-it no longer liked the effects of the drug...felt harsher...so my time with it was over...I miss it greatly (back then it was seasonal when You could get it...so one was very attune to the times of year/nature itself....it was like looking forward to vacation.
But in a natural setting (Woods,waterfalls etc) or controlled environment that breathes safety-such as a home...it was a very giving drug ....in the way of mind expansion and ways to think or look upon things...the simplest things would show the beauty of themselves.
Todays lsd is much different from days past....and scary.
the main reason for most visuals attuned to it was your pupils dilate and become big as saucers letting in all surrounding light.
imagine seeing in a forest of pitch black....never fearing to fall or stumble because all can be seen...I use to run as fast as I could through the forests at such times...weaving in and around the trees splashing in streams-Wrote a lot of fun music with friends too...sadly my body changed as I grew older-it no longer liked the effects of the drug...felt harsher...so my time with it was over...I miss it greatly (back then it was seasonal when You could get it...so one was very attune to the times of year/nature itself....it was like looking forward to vacation.
Re: Leaving Some Distance
5th Sep 2014 4:25pm
It takes great strength to remain oneself under so many eyes. Tighter and higher indeed, Soul.
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re: Re: Leaving Some Distance
5th Sep 2014 4:31pm
Oh its so True Dear Atakti...society, self, responsibilities, actions...energy of and from people....they rarely recognize it's effect.
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