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when she walked into the bar...
I looked away,
not wishing to stare...
and now she says
I did not care...
not wishing to stare...
and now she says
I did not care...
Published 4th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 13th May 2018 9:38pm
4th Sep 2014 1:09am
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4th Sep 2014 1:15am
I never quite get it right,
the not being intrusive
and yet showing an
interest..:)
thanks...
the not being intrusive
and yet showing an
interest..:)
thanks...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
4th Sep 2014 4:04am
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4th Sep 2014 6:33pm
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5th Sep 2014 3:05am
Hmmm... dartford, luv :-* ~
Correct me if I'm wrong, but somewhere along the way, something must have happened to lead to a lengthier dialogue if she's complaining (no less!) to you of indifference on your part initially.
It sounds as though things might not be a total loss after all, luv. ;-*
Correct me if I'm wrong, but somewhere along the way, something must have happened to lead to a lengthier dialogue if she's complaining (no less!) to you of indifference on your part initially.
It sounds as though things might not be a total loss after all, luv. ;-*
5th Sep 2014 11:39pm