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Feed Me
My heart hangs
On your every word
Thirsting for the
Pleasure of the sweet music
Coming from your loving heart
They feed my soul
The nourishment it needs
To stay happy, dancing and
Alive to carry me forward
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
Your sweet words
Feed me
On your every word
Thirsting for the
Pleasure of the sweet music
Coming from your loving heart
They feed my soul
The nourishment it needs
To stay happy, dancing and
Alive to carry me forward
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
Your sweet words
Feed me
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 11:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
4th Sep 2014 00:14am
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4th Sep 2014 2:29am
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jun 2018 9:39pm
4th Sep 2014 1:16am
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4th Sep 2014 2:34am
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
4th Sep 2014 2:35am
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4th Sep 2014 2:41am
4th Sep 2014 3:47am
4th Sep 2014 6:29am
Oh my my X.....i hope she keeps u well fed too babydoll
Loved this write hun
Hugs
Belle
Loved this write hun
Hugs
Belle
5th Sep 2014 00:05am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
4th Sep 2014 10:23am
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5th Sep 2014 00:07am
5th Sep 2014 2:59am
Ah, xmar82, luv :-* ~
This whole poem, so seemingly painstakingly crafted, a meticulous masterpiece out of the whole of its wonders, I find myself drawn over and over to one particular phrase:
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
There is something about this section and what immediately follows:
Your sweet words
Feed me
You have said it all here, whatever needs to be said is contained, in truth, right here.
Hold tightly to one another, luv. :-*
This whole poem, so seemingly painstakingly crafted, a meticulous masterpiece out of the whole of its wonders, I find myself drawn over and over to one particular phrase:
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
There is something about this section and what immediately follows:
Your sweet words
Feed me
You have said it all here, whatever needs to be said is contained, in truth, right here.
Hold tightly to one another, luv. :-*
6th Sep 2014 7:22pm
Yes exactly, I derive the strength from her loving words. Glad you enjoyed it. Stop in any time.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
5th Sep 2014 12:11pm
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6th Sep 2014 7:24pm
6th Sep 2014 6:53pm
6th Sep 2014 7:25pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
7th Sep 2014 3:33am
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