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Flight of Fancy
she was caught in
his web of lies
holding her captive
struggling
to free herself from
strangulating bondage
which only made matters worse
trapped in
misery
stuck
waiting
waiting
waiting
to learn how to
get free
or be eaten alive
by the mere tragedy
of it
his web of lies
holding her captive
struggling
to free herself from
strangulating bondage
which only made matters worse
trapped in
misery
stuck
waiting
waiting
waiting
to learn how to
get free
or be eaten alive
by the mere tragedy
of it
Published 2nd Sep 2014
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2nd Sep 2014 7:30pm
3rd Sep 2014 11:36pm
3rd Sep 2014 7:22am
This is vivid even beyond the image you've chosen. The image could have been of a drug addicted prostitute or an overwhelmed mother in a shelter with several children ... This could be great video poem flashing metaphorical images.
3rd Sep 2014 11:38pm
Thank you so much LobodeSanPedro..i am humbled by your comments and compliments, appreciate your thoughts! :)
3rd Sep 2014 8:33pm
Captivating in its intensity. The photo adds to the effect of suffocation by someone who's near to you. Love it.
3rd Sep 2014 11:43pm
Thank You So Much Dear Iris!! OX
Yes, the photo truly helped captivate the feel, so happy you Love it! :) that means so much!
Yes, the photo truly helped captivate the feel, so happy you Love it! :) that means so much!
3rd Sep 2014 11:44pm