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'To Chase the Shadows...'
Rapt, in a maze
of darkness
as the ebbing
of light deceases...
up, and around
the corners,
to the edges
of imagined,
pulchritudinous
angels...
enmasse, descending
like stars' shine
'pon a silken earth...
aghast...
and yet, weighted
from the haste
of unrelenting urges...
to 'ever engage this chase
of the shadow's flight...
of darkness
as the ebbing
of light deceases...
up, and around
the corners,
to the edges
of imagined,
pulchritudinous
angels...
enmasse, descending
like stars' shine
'pon a silken earth...
aghast...
and yet, weighted
from the haste
of unrelenting urges...
to 'ever engage this chase
of the shadow's flight...
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Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 3:00pm
Nice job! It brings so many thought to mind. From guilt, to remembering the past; lifes choices; death.
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 3:13pm
Thank you, it's kinda what I had in mind...a myriad of thoughts
appreciate ur time n thoughts :)
appreciate ur time n thoughts :)
Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 3:22pm
Chasing shadows of what was...sounds like an undertaking. Someday you may hold it though..good read Poetik.
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 4:18pm
Thank you sweetness, I'm always happy for your visits
n thoughts... Truly grateful for all your support :)
n thoughts... Truly grateful for all your support :)
Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 3:23pm
Oh, Poetikmind, luv :-*. ~
I'm going to have to rename you... ;-* (and I was ever so fond of erotic ninja), but it is too limiting, I fear, for the vastness of your talent.
So many things in this poem, luv, so very many are utterly magnifique:
Rapt, in a maze
of darkness
as the ebbing
of light deceases...
of imagined,
pulchritudinous
angels...
'pon a silken earth...
to 'ever engage this chase
of the shadow's flight...
I may as well have quoted the whole thing! It's all quite splendid, luv! :-*
I'm going to have to rename you... ;-* (and I was ever so fond of erotic ninja), but it is too limiting, I fear, for the vastness of your talent.
So many things in this poem, luv, so very many are utterly magnifique:
Rapt, in a maze
of darkness
as the ebbing
of light deceases...
of imagined,
pulchritudinous
angels...
'pon a silken earth...
to 'ever engage this chase
of the shadow's flight...
I may as well have quoted the whole thing! It's all quite splendid, luv! :-*
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 4:23pm
Aaaaawwww u sweet sweet woman! C'mere, muah!
I'm blushing n truly humbled by your words n support...thank u! :)
I'm blushing n truly humbled by your words n support...thank u! :)
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 6:58pm
Thanks bro. Funny you said "quiet" most everyone I know
would never use that word for me lol
Appreciate you dude :)
would never use that word for me lol
Appreciate you dude :)
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
31st Aug 2014 5:12am
Thank you my sweet angel, I'm happy you enjoyed
n grateful for your continued support :)
n grateful for your continued support :)
Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
30th Aug 2014 6:40pm
loved how this weaved in and out of the light and the darkness!!!
fav lines:
"up, and around
the corners,
to the edges
of imagined" Ahhh Tangible Tapestry Beautifully Woven Sir..i truly enjoyed :)
fav lines:
"up, and around
the corners,
to the edges
of imagined" Ahhh Tangible Tapestry Beautifully Woven Sir..i truly enjoyed :)
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re: Re: 'To Chase the Shadows...'
31st Aug 2014 5:14am
Precious one, u make my heart dance... :) do pleased you lined this ink, n as always in thankful for your undying support :) appreciate u much! :)
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