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Simplest things
Bliss can be found in the simplest things
You sent me a text today
Told me you were standing in a long line at the DMV
Loving me...
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
30th Aug 2014 7:59am
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re: Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 8:02am
Thank you, SugarSkull, luv :-*.
There is that rather hellish aspect to the DMV, I suppose... :-p
There is that rather hellish aspect to the DMV, I suppose... :-p
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
30th Aug 2014 12:34pm
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re: Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 1:09pm
Got it in one, GeniusGirl, luv :-*! It IS the Department of Motor Vehicles... :-D
Thank you very much, luv. :-*
Thank you very much, luv. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
30th Aug 2014 4:33pm
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re: Re: Simplest things
Not that you cannot educe whatever you'd like, Jack Tex, luv, from my poems, but that particular comment and the carte blanche extended with it really had something to do with that poem... ;-*
However, you would be quite accurate and wise in your eduction, luv, to make that assessment, referencing, of course, one of my favorite quotations:
"You cannot think straight with a heart full of fear, for fear seeks safety, not truth...
A heart full of love, on the other hand, has a limbering effect on the mind."
William Sloane Coffin
I cannot say I never feel fear, luv, but I will not be ruled by it. No longer. Once, it defined much of my life; I am immeasurably grateful that is no longer so. I will not have it be again... ;-*
Thank you, luv. You are so much to me of ineffability, you know. :-*
However, you would be quite accurate and wise in your eduction, luv, to make that assessment, referencing, of course, one of my favorite quotations:
"You cannot think straight with a heart full of fear, for fear seeks safety, not truth...
A heart full of love, on the other hand, has a limbering effect on the mind."
William Sloane Coffin
I cannot say I never feel fear, luv, but I will not be ruled by it. No longer. Once, it defined much of my life; I am immeasurably grateful that is no longer so. I will not have it be again... ;-*
Thank you, luv. You are so much to me of ineffability, you know. :-*
Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 5:12pm
DMV the perfect to daydream of sweeter things...
N yes this was short but certainly sweet :)
N yes this was short but certainly sweet :)
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re: Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 9:19pm
Thank you very much, Erotic ninja, luv :-*! (When I come up with another one, I'll run it by you, but I'm fond of you and this one too, so for now the moniker remains. :-*)
You're sweet as well, luv, to tell me so. :-*
You're sweet as well, luv, to tell me so. :-*
Re: Simplest things
I thought it
an impossibility
to find poetry
and love
at the DMV
When life itself
is your muse
inspiration is found
in anything
you choose
Beautful words Savaja!
an impossibility
to find poetry
and love
at the DMV
When life itself
is your muse
inspiration is found
in anything
you choose
Beautful words Savaja!
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re: Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 9:26pm
Gahdess_Worship luv :-* ~
This is a beautiful thing you've penned here. Thank you, luv. I am deeply honored by your words. :-*
This is a beautiful thing you've penned here. Thank you, luv. I am deeply honored by your words. :-*
re: re: Re: Simplest things
30th Aug 2014 10:20pm
It'll be a much more pleasurable experience at the DMV from now on :)
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re: Re: Simplest things
31st Aug 2014 6:07am
Thank you, Zazzles, luv :-* ~
You are the veriest sweetheart, yourself, luv, with such sweetly stellar comments.
Thank you again. :-*
You are the veriest sweetheart, yourself, luv, with such sweetly stellar comments.
Thank you again. :-*
Re: Simplest things
31st Aug 2014 7:03pm
Alas! I struggle to find poetry here. It's a common lover's "text", nice though.
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re: Re: Simplest things
31st Aug 2014 7:22pm
Ah, candycrier, luv :-* ~
Poetry is, as I'm sure you know, in the eye of the beholder, and not all who behold will find poetry in all things equally, ne c'est pas?
Thank you, nonetheless, luv... :-*
I always appreciate you.
Poetry is, as I'm sure you know, in the eye of the beholder, and not all who behold will find poetry in all things equally, ne c'est pas?
Thank you, nonetheless, luv... :-*
I always appreciate you.
Re: Simplest things
31st Aug 2014 10:14pm
re: Re: Simplest things
31st Aug 2014 10:54pm
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-* ~
You are so right about that!
Your visits always bring a smile to my face, luv. :-*
You are so right about that!
Your visits always bring a smile to my face, luv. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
1st Sep 2014 2:03pm
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re: Re: Simplest things
1st Sep 2014 5:27pm
Thank you, Granite, luv! :-*
How wonderfully you put it: simple complexities of love.
What a Visionary you are. :-*
How wonderfully you put it: simple complexities of love.
What a Visionary you are. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
1st Sep 2014 5:41pm
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Re: Simplest things
1st Sep 2014 5:33pm
re: Re: Simplest things
1st Sep 2014 6:00pm
Thank you so much, Hashman, luv! :-*
My day is always brighter when you visit, luv. :-*
My day is always brighter when you visit, luv. :-*
Re: Simplest things
It really is the tiniest things that are so powerful(except loving is not a tiny thing). Excellent thought...not to mention verse fantastic.
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re: Re: Simplest things
2nd Sep 2014 5:16am
Thank you, Pishashee, luv! :-*
You are so very right: loving is not a tiny thing. Mayhap, standing in the DMV texting is, though, eh? :-p
Then again, maybe not. :-D
You are so very right: loving is not a tiny thing. Mayhap, standing in the DMV texting is, though, eh? :-p
Then again, maybe not. :-D
Re: Simplest things
5th Sep 2014 4:18am
re: Re: Simplest things
5th Sep 2014 3:57pm
Thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv! :-*
Definitely to treasure, luv.
Bliss and bliss: I keep writing about this... ;-*
Definitely to treasure, luv.
Bliss and bliss: I keep writing about this... ;-*