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Do I...

Gentleness beyound reason, and yet you are...

Words so silky, but filled �with love...

No deception or lies, only a heart open clear...

Body that speaks of sensuality, with bursts of overwhelming desire...

Lips that make me crave the depth of you...

Eyes that draw me inside of who you truly are...

Breasts that are a compassionate caged soul...

Legs that wrap my body within folds of beauty...

Such graceful love, I can't think past my ownself...

You don't know my past!

You don't know my pain!

You don't know what I've hidden so well!

Do I tell?

If I do, would you run from me?

Dare I take that chance or love you from today til forevermore?

Do I ?

By:RFULLER 8/29/14

Written by blueeyes415263

Published 30th Aug 2014

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Re: Do I...

Solomon_Song

30th Aug 2014 8:44pm

Clever narration as by a man who adores what he has found and wants nothing to come between himself and her. Could be summed up rhymingly as:

You are as tasty as a bun!
Do I tell you what I have done,
When you're right here offering fun?

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blueeyes415263

31st Aug 2014 10:44pm

Thank you

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Re: Do I...

MsRockyJackson

30th Aug 2014 9:09pm

Beautiful and sensuous the writing is a little too spaced out though. It's a lovely poem and it's also romantic.
Well done :)

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blueeyes415263

31st Aug 2014 10:45pm

Thank you

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Re: Do I...

Awakenedsoul

31st Aug 2014 00:26am

I believe this is a genuinely a very good write. A person of today built from yesterday making you ponder the wonders of "Do I". If yesterday never existed we would blindly leep never questioning the thought that tangle the ropes of living freely.