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Opium Notes
I.
Contented
and avoiding work
in this bare bones
Concrete park (the city)
warmness
and smallness
Contentment resides here
But so does great loss
of years of potential greatness
and grandeur
but then there is still
Contentment
. . .
II.
I prayed for thee
Erotic ritual
You had vanished
precious poppy
The addiction
is always in mind
The mind of others
usually pushing me further
Companion in life
delicate flower
She hides in the shadows
She likes me
I know this
but she runs in fear
. . .
III.
More often w/ greater outer beauty
comes a deep canyon
of the most vile and true
ugliness
. . .
IV.
After the warm
cozy fire
has taken it's place
underneath my flesh
It feels appropriate
this opiate
Men and women
are simply optical illusions
of each other
Functioning on a primal level
Fun and hollow
Beautiful and lonely
Inclusive and exclusive
I am in a cocooning stage
Contented
and avoiding work
in this bare bones
Concrete park (the city)
warmness
and smallness
Contentment resides here
But so does great loss
of years of potential greatness
and grandeur
but then there is still
Contentment
. . .
II.
I prayed for thee
Erotic ritual
You had vanished
precious poppy
The addiction
is always in mind
The mind of others
usually pushing me further
Companion in life
delicate flower
She hides in the shadows
She likes me
I know this
but she runs in fear
. . .
III.
More often w/ greater outer beauty
comes a deep canyon
of the most vile and true
ugliness
. . .
IV.
After the warm
cozy fire
has taken it's place
underneath my flesh
It feels appropriate
this opiate
Men and women
are simply optical illusions
of each other
Functioning on a primal level
Fun and hollow
Beautiful and lonely
Inclusive and exclusive
I am in a cocooning stage
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