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Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
There's such
a presence
to her essence
Yet, I can't be sure
still I think it's
her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned
her allegiance I vow
prancing like peacock,
defiantly proud
gosh damned I gotta
say out it loud...
NOW THAT
is a real woman!
alas, I'm simply
just lost inside
my mind's
'room' again...
a presence
to her essence
Yet, I can't be sure
still I think it's
her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned
her allegiance I vow
prancing like peacock,
defiantly proud
gosh damned I gotta
say out it loud...
NOW THAT
is a real woman!
alas, I'm simply
just lost inside
my mind's
'room' again...
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
29th Aug 2014 8:38pm
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re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
29th Aug 2014 9:57pm
Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
29th Aug 2014 11:55pm
re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 2:36am
Thank you my sweet Grace, ur wonderful! Appreciate your continued support :)
Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 1:41am
Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
This one is sweet and just a little lost boy sounding... :-*
I hope she shows up, luv, and proves to be everything you need and that she recognizes your worth.
This one is sweet and just a little lost boy sounding... :-*
I hope she shows up, luv, and proves to be everything you need and that she recognizes your worth.
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re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 2:45am
Thank you my friend, yea lil lost huh? lol
Lucky for me I got pretty good navigational skills lol
Thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n time :)
Lucky for me I got pretty good navigational skills lol
Thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n time :)
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
30th Aug 2014 1:57am
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re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 2:49am
Aaaaawwww Broomie, U are sweet! Thanks for the smile
n always for your support :)
n always for your support :)
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30th Aug 2014 2:51am
Sweetest Kate...thank I for ur continued support n ur wonderful
comments, I'm so grateful n wow u like my pic too!? Awesome! lol
comments, I'm so grateful n wow u like my pic too!? Awesome! lol
re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 2:52am
Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 4:28am
re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
30th Aug 2014 10:45am
Thank you my dear, yes I can say in particular
that I REALly saw this face n thought wow
how pretty, n so I drew it :)
that I REALly saw this face n thought wow
how pretty, n so I drew it :)
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
30th Aug 2014 5:33pm
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re: Re: Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
31st Aug 2014 4:59am
Oh my beauty, you know how I love ur
wonderful praise! Sadly that 'muse' u speak of is simply
my imagination... Deeply n always grateful to you mami... :)
wonderful praise! Sadly that 'muse' u speak of is simply
my imagination... Deeply n always grateful to you mami... :)