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Strangers
Do we pass by
like strangers
within a field
that could connect us
where empathy
still trys
to touch the blind
where common sense
hangs by a thread
on a damaged bridge
that spans the cracks
between us
like strangers
within a field
that could connect us
where empathy
still trys
to touch the blind
where common sense
hangs by a thread
on a damaged bridge
that spans the cracks
between us
Published 28th Aug 2014
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I like the statement within ... We're all connected but lack the sight to see or understand that there's more that binds us than separates us ... Bravo!
Writer's note: line 6 "tries"
Writer's note: line 6 "tries"
28th Aug 2014 10:59pm
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31st Aug 2014 11:06pm
please sir may I have some part, what happened next? you captivate so quickly...
1st Sep 2014 2:16am