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Memories...
Touch me
Fuck me
Squeeze
My breasts
I squeeze you
With my cunt
(Surprised I used THAT word? Sometimes no other will suffice...)
Hard
In reply
So
You
Pinch
I
Pinch
Back
You're fascinated
By this immediate response
My body has
To your every move
Upon
In
Me
I'm
Fascinated too
Intrigued
So
I initiate to see if I can elicit responses
From you
I clench THOSE muscles tightly, tightly
Round your hardness
Sure enough you groan, jerk, spasm
Choke out unintelligible mutters
I release, then tighten further curious now to see what depths I might drive you to, if I can snap that rigid control I see straining the cords of your neck
The muscles lining your arms and chest and yes! There you go...
Driving deep, deeper into me
I've done it now
You're a wild man
Fucking me
All control
Lost
Gone
In the fray
Thank the gods!
I'll be sore come morning from you
(Cumming from your ruthless pummeling of my sweet spot)
I'll remember you throughout the day
Twinges
Mini
Orgasmic
Spasms
Chasing through my blissed-out chasm
Thank you for these memories...
Published 27th Aug 2014
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27th Aug 2014 4:42am
27th Aug 2014 1:20pm
27th Aug 2014 6:45am
27th Aug 2014 1:24pm
Why, thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv! :-*
Your stamp of approval is the seal of quite an aficionado of the sensual world.
I feel especially cherished, luv... :-*
Your stamp of approval is the seal of quite an aficionado of the sensual world.
I feel especially cherished, luv... :-*
27th Aug 2014 7:38pm
And I didn't mean seem arrogant with the "stamp of approval" I simply mean't that your work drives me to physical action :)
Anonymous
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27th Aug 2014 11:10am
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27th Aug 2014 1:31pm
Granite, luv :-* ~
Your responses almost invariably make me want to crawl atop you, luv. ;-*
Or, have you pin me under you...
Thank. You. ;-*
Your responses almost invariably make me want to crawl atop you, luv. ;-*
Or, have you pin me under you...
Thank. You. ;-*
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27th Aug 2014 4:00pm
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27th Aug 2014 6:21pm
Thank you, SugarSkull, luv :-*, although perhaps I should be wary of you, darling, when you say "killer" anything... ;-D
I rather adore you, you know. :-*
I rather adore you, you know. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
27th Aug 2014 7:59pm
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27th Aug 2014 11:07pm
Ahh, GeniusGirl, luv :-* ~
Thank you very much, dear one, though I think it's mutual fandom here, luv ;-*.
He does tend to make one rather tetchy when he talks of killing...
Yet, he IS undeniably charming. ;-*
Thank you very much, dear one, though I think it's mutual fandom here, luv ;-*.
He does tend to make one rather tetchy when he talks of killing...
Yet, he IS undeniably charming. ;-*
27th Aug 2014 11:19pm
28th Aug 2014 1:23am
Thank you very much, xmar82, luv! :-*
You always make me feel so very appreciated...and sexy, luv. ;-*
You always make me feel so very appreciated...and sexy, luv. ;-*
28th Aug 2014 6:32am
You bet ya, Savaja. "Sometimes no other will suffice."
Love the realism displayed, combined with control and
loss of control, an erotic trifecta.
I applaud your exceptional talent(s). :)
Love the realism displayed, combined with control and
loss of control, an erotic trifecta.
I applaud your exceptional talent(s). :)
28th Aug 2014 1:02pm
High praise, indeed, VegasPoet, luv :-* coming from you who know quite a great deal about that particular trifecta. ;-*
Thank you very, very much, Sir.
I am humbled and extremely complimented by your acknowledgment (and praise!) of my talent(s). ;-*
Thank you very, very much, Sir.
I am humbled and extremely complimented by your acknowledgment (and praise!) of my talent(s). ;-*
30th Aug 2014 6:09am
30th Aug 2014 6:54am
Thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*!
Heavy artillery, indeed. :-D I hadn't thought of that, but you put it very aptly, luv. ;-*
And those shock waves, Mmm...
Heavy artillery, indeed. :-D I hadn't thought of that, but you put it very aptly, luv. ;-*
And those shock waves, Mmm...
30th Aug 2014 9:03pm
Not bad, it was sexy, raw, passionate however I wouldn't explain why I used a certain word and you didn't build into the climax that well. It was still a good poem and I love the boldness of your write.
30th Aug 2014 9:39pm
MsRockyJackson, luv :-* ~
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate that. You didn't have to do so, but you did and also took the time to comment, for which I'm grateful.
I considered NOT explaining why I used "cunt" where I did; I've used it before and have offered no explanation for it, however, for reasons of my own, I chose to, though I realize it interrupted the flow of the poem quite a bit. I accepted that as the cost of doing that bit of business there. My overall goal was accomplished, so a little flow disruption, I felt I could accept, but I applaud your good eye because it was disruptive, indeed. ;-*
As for climax...
In this piece, my objective was a bit different from other pieces, so I wasn't working toward quite the same sort of, er, explosive finish as I might have been in other pieces I have done. However, again I applaud your perceptiveness because it could have been quite a bit different with some change in strategy.
Perhaps, I'll take another look at this poem and see if I'd like to shift some things around. I appreciate the time you took with this, luv. :-*
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate that. You didn't have to do so, but you did and also took the time to comment, for which I'm grateful.
I considered NOT explaining why I used "cunt" where I did; I've used it before and have offered no explanation for it, however, for reasons of my own, I chose to, though I realize it interrupted the flow of the poem quite a bit. I accepted that as the cost of doing that bit of business there. My overall goal was accomplished, so a little flow disruption, I felt I could accept, but I applaud your good eye because it was disruptive, indeed. ;-*
As for climax...
In this piece, my objective was a bit different from other pieces, so I wasn't working toward quite the same sort of, er, explosive finish as I might have been in other pieces I have done. However, again I applaud your perceptiveness because it could have been quite a bit different with some change in strategy.
Perhaps, I'll take another look at this poem and see if I'd like to shift some things around. I appreciate the time you took with this, luv. :-*