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Fading into nothingness...
Black blood
Pink nails
Deep cuts
Sharp blades
Blue marks
Pale stains
Light tears
Red face
Hard Heart
Slow pace
Harsh scars
New game
Deep sleep
No pain
Sweet Dreams
Wont wake
Goodnight =(
Pink nails
Deep cuts
Sharp blades
Blue marks
Pale stains
Light tears
Red face
Hard Heart
Slow pace
Harsh scars
New game
Deep sleep
No pain
Sweet Dreams
Wont wake
Goodnight =(
Published 11th Apr 2011
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12th Apr 2011 5:30am
12th Apr 2011 9:37pm
16th Apr 2011 10:54pm
having two words per line gives this poem a really straight forward edge, adn the words of which those lines consist of are just brilliant.
the poem has a sad essence which i can relate too, i just hope you arent going through these emotions to such an extent that the poem states.
always here for you monnie,
take care x
the poem has a sad essence which i can relate too, i just hope you arent going through these emotions to such an extent that the poem states.
always here for you monnie,
take care x
18th Apr 2011 10:59pm
Thank you Riyah, I write this a long time ago so these aren't new feelings. I'm glad you enjoyed reading ;)
18th Apr 2011 10:17pm