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Naked
I've bared my skin and bones on here. Strangers know more about me than my own family. My poems describing my mind and my soul and what has happened to me in the most subliminal of ways...sometimes. I can only hope people think I'm not just another mediocre writer looking for attention, but then again when have I ever cared? When I write something I put a piece of my soul and I've written so many pieces that my poems are more alive than me. You people make me think I'm sane and for all I know you could be a sex offender or a person with a sad poem fetish who cries when they read my poems until they cum on the screen.
Too much?
Too much?
Published 22nd Aug 2014
| Edited 24th Aug 2014
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24th Aug 2014 8:06pm
Very nicely expressed! All of us are exposed here, some reveal everything, some wear masks to cover their faces but like getting naked in front of a crowd as long as the frown underneath never shows through. I think posting ones poetry is just a small piece of the picture. I was writing poems for many years before there was an internet and never thought of being published. I just had feelings inside that I needed to get out, often for someone in particular that I to express without fumbling my words. But to be truly naked you must strop away the skin and reveal your heart and soul, otherwise you miss the point of poetry. Attention comes from those of us who relate to the words we read and feel them as if they were written in our own hearts. JJ
