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Illusion of time
Life is not Time, more like Time is not the meaning of life.
Like the lollipop
Pick the right flavor
Enjoy the taste but you never know how long
Doesn't matter how long!
How long you pick the right one!
Published 19th Aug 2014
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19th Aug 2014 12:32pm
19th Aug 2014 5:08pm
Upbeat poem! I hope you see that.
And still: Deep underground poetry!
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And still: Deep underground poetry!
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19th Aug 2014 5:06pm
It's a good metaphor ... making a quality choice vs. worrying about quantitative measures (time) - but somehow the last line is off track
