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(3 HAIKUS ) FIRE,RAIN and WIND.
FIRE~(HAIKU)
Courting darkness
while mating oxygen.
Cumming in flames!
RAIN~ (HAIKU)
Falling lazily
caressing air,space and land.
Dripping wetness!
WIND~ (HAIKU)
Cruising from the east
ruffling leaves with the breeze.
Purifying every breathe!
Courting darkness
while mating oxygen.
Cumming in flames!
RAIN~ (HAIKU)
Falling lazily
caressing air,space and land.
Dripping wetness!
WIND~ (HAIKU)
Cruising from the east
ruffling leaves with the breeze.
Purifying every breathe!
Published 18th Aug 2014
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18th Aug 2014 2:30pm
18th Aug 2014 3:18pm
18th Aug 2014 3:02pm
Nice depiction of fire, rain and wind covering the positive and hey even the erotic side of mankind as in:
Cumming in flames!
Dripping wetness!
Hope you won't mind but I like the traditional Japanese haiku of 17 sylabbles in 5/7/5 sylabble count...just sayin'.
@EngrVV
Cumming in flames!
Dripping wetness!
Hope you won't mind but I like the traditional Japanese haiku of 17 sylabbles in 5/7/5 sylabble count...just sayin'.
@EngrVV
18th Aug 2014 3:15pm
Haha!Thanks D!Ah,not at all,i don't mind Eng..!I try to ah,go out of the way,irregular,(Actually that's my self-claimed style of writing*free-style*)follow the non rules of poetry! I have more fun that way!
I once tried the Japanese style,had a challenge with the beats(as a friend of mine,expert on haiku) calls it!
Pleasure to have you on my page!Highly appreciated!
I once tried the Japanese style,had a challenge with the beats(as a friend of mine,expert on haiku) calls it!
Pleasure to have you on my page!Highly appreciated!
18th Aug 2014 3:40pm
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