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Sweetness
Tonight
I crave
Your sweetness
Rough hands
Caressing gently
Hold me
Closely
Please
Let me
Feather kisses
Along your jaw
And nuzzle in your neck
Inhaling the warmth of you
Melt my curves
Close as can be
Curls riotous against you
Silk twining on your chest
Thighs touching
my skin softly
Yielding to yours
Published 18th Aug 2014
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18th Aug 2014 11:11am
Thank you, Tantric Acolyte, luv :-*.
I am glad the audio enhanced the poem for you, luv.
I am glad the audio enhanced the poem for you, luv.
18th Aug 2014 2:56pm
Sweets, that voice of yours needs a 900 number!!
Great write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
19th Aug 2014 3:53pm
18th Aug 2014 3:46pm
I totally agree with the gents above...your sultry voice has the sweetness of milk and honey, which wrap the words around smoothly as silk.
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
19th Aug 2014 4:01pm
D_Poetic Engineer, luv :-* ~
Now you've got me blushing blissfully, luv, with the ineffable gallantry of your words to me. :-*
Thank you, darling man! :-*
Now you've got me blushing blissfully, luv, with the ineffable gallantry of your words to me. :-*
Thank you, darling man! :-*
18th Aug 2014 4:07pm
The seductiveness of your voice underlines the erotic message of your wonderful poem, Savaja. Liked both a lot, the written and the audio poem!
19th Aug 2014 4:07pm
Thank you very much, Chiyo, luv :-*!
I am glad you enjoyed both written and audio for your poem gave me great joy as well, luv. :-*
I am glad you enjoyed both written and audio for your poem gave me great joy as well, luv. :-*
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18th Aug 2014 4:21pm
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19th Aug 2014 4:11pm
Snowcrystal, luv :-* ~
Ahhh! For you, that's the number. Call anytime, luv. ;-*
I humbly thank you, luv, but must demur; I am but a work in progress...
Ahhh! For you, that's the number. Call anytime, luv. ;-*
I humbly thank you, luv, but must demur; I am but a work in progress...
18th Aug 2014 10:58pm
19th Aug 2014 4:15pm
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-* ~
Ahhh, those delicate kisses...
Trés doux, mon cher. :-*
Ahhh, those delicate kisses...
Trés doux, mon cher. :-*
19th Aug 2014 5:34am
19th Aug 2014 4:17pm
Ahh, JohnFeddeler, luv :-* ~
I do so love crushed velvet too...
Even your comments are poetry, luv. ;-*
I do so love crushed velvet too...
Even your comments are poetry, luv. ;-*
19th Aug 2014 6:23am
Double the experience with voice and the print
both end too soon for my liking.
both end too soon for my liking.
19th Aug 2014 4:30pm
JAZZMANOR, luv :-* ~
You compliment me beyond belief, luv, with your terse statement indicating I ended too soon for your taste. :-*
Thank you.
You know, perhaps another of my poems might satisfy... ;-*
You compliment me beyond belief, luv, with your terse statement indicating I ended too soon for your taste. :-*
Thank you.
You know, perhaps another of my poems might satisfy... ;-*
19th Aug 2014 9:04pm
19th Aug 2014 10:06pm
Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 7:25pm
Short and satisfying ink, Savaja! I'm not too keen on long-winded and lengthy pieces on DUP, so I'm loving this one... :)
Filled with the 'sweetest-sweetness'...
Enjoyed! Xo
Filled with the 'sweetest-sweetness'...
Enjoyed! Xo
Thank you so much, RainC, luv :-*!
I am glad to have gratified your desire for a wee petit fours rather than un gâteau. :-*
I am glad to have gratified your desire for a wee petit fours rather than un gâteau. :-*
2nd Sep 2014 4:44pm
3rd Sep 2014 00:44am