just something i wrote for a compatition tell me what you think

I was a slave to my weaknesses Alcohol made it all seem right they kept me well in supply and the drugs such kind drugs they locked me in their dungeon she came down would lay across the bed and put coke on clit she would call me over and slap me but not let me have that wondrous drug not yet she would call to him he'd bring me whisky and then tie me to the chain swing the iron links pinch but i dare not complain I winced as one link pinched
my sack they saw it and said are you not happy they're I replied with a smile yes ma'am very happy thank you but it was to late no I saw that uncomfortable look we musn't have the she said he untied me and put me on the rack I thanked him for his kindness he smiled and then slid his cock deep in my ass he pumped me as fast and hard as he could till he exploded in me  I thanked him for his gift he said you'd welcome and went to her she was not happy she slapped him said he's to easy on me she walked over to me and bid me kiss her i did her tounge soft as velvet and warm as hot apple pie and the hint strawberry on her breath it was wonderful then I felt a sting on my tounge and the taste of iron as blood filed my mouth from where she bit my tounge she stopped and said that's can't taste to good now can it I was afraid of what was next she saw it then said there there I'd  never hurt you would I love I said no ma'am let me make it better she said she reached around stuffed her hand up my ass scooped out his seed and fed it to me I had to thank her or it would be worse for me then she released me off the rack nelt me by the bed and bid me eat her ass I thanked her for the kindness and licked her hot hole right away then she bid me fuck her hard so I did she made me cumm in her pussy three times I thought it was over for this session she asked if I'd like a line and I told her that would be great she bid me snort one from her navel to her crotch i did so gladly she grabbed my hair and yanked so that I looked in her eyes and she said look what you did I'm dripping you I apologize and she says that won't do and forces my head between her legs bidding me lick and sick out every last drop I try frantically know what's next I'm not fast enough she bids him come over and masterbate in my ass by wich I mean he wrapped his hand around his cock and shoved them both up my ass fucking his hand she pulled me so tight between her legs I couldn't breath she mumbled something about a drink next thing  know she is pissing down my throat the room goes black moments later it seems I wake up it had been several minutes actually my ass on fire and face laying in a puddle of her piss and there it is on the table a bottle of wild turkey and gram of coke I'm so pissed at myself I could stop this abuse at any time they would let me but I can't I agreed to be her slave six months ago back then she was really very kind and passionate I'm such a slave to my sick needs I allowed her to go way beyond even her wildest dreams I'm sure one of these days I'll die serving her I'm sure of it but she is my master and I love her my sick twisted desire to please her makes me sick but I can do nothing to stop myself I'm a slave to my desires