deepundergroundpoetry.com
in which we visit a broken haiku
spontaneous combustion
seeming preferable at times
to neurotic asphyxiation
Published 17th Aug 2014
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
17th Aug 2014 8:41pm
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- Edited 28th Jul 2019 9:35pm
18th Aug 2014 00:45am
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18th Aug 2014 1:52am
Better do than don't - definitely a preferable motto for life - great haiku albeit splashed all over the walls (a good thing)
