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Maybe I'll Jump
So cruel
I feel your push
I hear your laughs
you point and stare
come in close
invade my space
disrupt my sphere
you raise your feathers
you squawk and crow
wanting all to see
come and look
watch me tower
make one cower
I feel your push
and the cliff is right here.
I feel your push
I hear your laughs
you point and stare
come in close
invade my space
disrupt my sphere
you raise your feathers
you squawk and crow
wanting all to see
come and look
watch me tower
make one cower
I feel your push
and the cliff is right here.
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Re: Maybe I'll Jump
17th Aug 2014 3:19pm
Jumping to a new beginning may not be fun at all. Good read Hashman... you do sound hassled though. :)
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17th Aug 2014 3:24pm
Maybe, Hashman, luv, you won't jump. :-*
After all, why jump at someone else's behest, luv? Clearly, they don't value you, idiots that they be.
If you must satisfy someone other than yourself, then you'll have to satisfy those who'd rather keep you round, ne c'est pas? :-*
If necessary, you may have to snap a feather or two to stop all that crowding...
After all, why jump at someone else's behest, luv? Clearly, they don't value you, idiots that they be.
If you must satisfy someone other than yourself, then you'll have to satisfy those who'd rather keep you round, ne c'est pas? :-*
If necessary, you may have to snap a feather or two to stop all that crowding...
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17th Aug 2014 3:43pm
just a thought in my head about the all powerful ones who push others around for enjoyment (bullies) :) peace to you Savja
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17th Aug 2014 4:05pm
Re: Maybe I'll Jump
17th Aug 2014 7:10pm
Oh, this one is suffocatingly close, Hashman. Your tone is urgent and pressure seeps from every line. A very dynamic thiough disturbing piece which I utterly like! Don't jump, stay your ground. xo
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17th Aug 2014 9:40pm
Re: Maybe I'll Jump
I know so many of them - I just started ignoring them and do whats right for what's in my heart; although completely misunderstood, as we all are so many times. I know how hard this is when they're close. Your mind, therefore your writing, has the strength to change lives, and move the mountains..
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18th Aug 2014 8:19pm
Don't dare jump bro! If you do you just may
ruin those fly kicks! U have on! lol :)
Seriously, not worth it for real, but u know that right?
ruin those fly kicks! U have on! lol :)
Seriously, not worth it for real, but u know that right?
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 8:42pm
Good stuff, hash! Make sure if you jump, the fall is worth it.
...for every jump doesn't kill us.....Xo
...for every jump doesn't kill us.....Xo
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