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SATED GODDESS
[i](Inspired by Savaja's sensual masterpiece, "Wanton Goddess")
[b][font=Trebuchet MS]Risking all
even the very breath of life
he silently creeps
with feline stealth
into her sacrosanct bed chamber
Foolish acolyte
by his Goddess enchanted
impelled by Eros
pertinacious in his desire
to lay body and soul
on her naked altar
The heady, earthy odor
of patchouli scented incense
excites his need
to dig deep
into her humid soil
tending to
her sublime blush
orchid blossom
Startled by his sudden presence
she is at once perturbed and aroused
by his audacious entrance
his libidinous smile grows
as he sashays to her side
her once indignant expression
softens to reciprocal desire
Running long, painted fingernails
across his bare, sculpted chest
“who summoned you?” she asks
he leans forward and whispers
“Mistress it was your essence
that bid me come
and attend to your needs”
navigating South
resting her hand on the tented fabric
of his loin cloth
she whisper
“ you will do”
She reaches and pulls him to her
kissing him with such force
as to take his breath away
“fill me now” she commands
astonished with her strength
backing away
“wait awhile mistress”
he whispers
sensing that her hunger
would not be satiated
by mere coitus
Enthralled by her nakedness
taking time he admires
her voluptuous form
grasping a vial of oil
from atop her bed table
anointing her breasts
with the rose scented unction
gently, with strong hands, kneading
the ripe globes
suckling their erect ruby nipples
His oil saturated hands
paint her torso
continuing on their sensuous
tactile journey
massaging as they go
tracing the moonlit curves of her hips
made more brilliant by candlelight
bidding her turn over
he rest his head on her buttocks
so enamored he is by it’s beauty
Again on her back
he kneels between her thighs
seeing her lush florid portal
by her nectar shimmering
he draws a long stuttered breath
so overcome by the marvelous sight
and made dizzy by her inebriating scent
she giggles as he runs his tongue
across the full length of her folds
a surge of electricity
pulses through her body
as he massages and sucks on her pearl
her screams of ecstasy
shock the night air
Wholly focused
on giving her profound pleasure
with one hand pressing on her pelvis
he plunges two fingers deep
into her wet, pink paradise
her thighs encircle and hold him
with a vise-like grip
as with every thrust
he guides her ever closer
to orgasmic Nirvana
by her fever pitched moans
he knows she is close
under his hand her pelvis
suddenly shudders
He rushes to kiss her smiling lips
blanketing her body with his
gazing into her still ecstatic eyes
he whispers
“Mistress I must leave you now
soon to come again
when if my Goddess still desires
I will enter in”
[b][font=Trebuchet MS]Risking all
even the very breath of life
he silently creeps
with feline stealth
into her sacrosanct bed chamber
Foolish acolyte
by his Goddess enchanted
impelled by Eros
pertinacious in his desire
to lay body and soul
on her naked altar
The heady, earthy odor
of patchouli scented incense
excites his need
to dig deep
into her humid soil
tending to
her sublime blush
orchid blossom
Startled by his sudden presence
she is at once perturbed and aroused
by his audacious entrance
his libidinous smile grows
as he sashays to her side
her once indignant expression
softens to reciprocal desire
Running long, painted fingernails
across his bare, sculpted chest
“who summoned you?” she asks
he leans forward and whispers
“Mistress it was your essence
that bid me come
and attend to your needs”
navigating South
resting her hand on the tented fabric
of his loin cloth
she whisper
“ you will do”
She reaches and pulls him to her
kissing him with such force
as to take his breath away
“fill me now” she commands
astonished with her strength
backing away
“wait awhile mistress”
he whispers
sensing that her hunger
would not be satiated
by mere coitus
Enthralled by her nakedness
taking time he admires
her voluptuous form
grasping a vial of oil
from atop her bed table
anointing her breasts
with the rose scented unction
gently, with strong hands, kneading
the ripe globes
suckling their erect ruby nipples
His oil saturated hands
paint her torso
continuing on their sensuous
tactile journey
massaging as they go
tracing the moonlit curves of her hips
made more brilliant by candlelight
bidding her turn over
he rest his head on her buttocks
so enamored he is by it’s beauty
Again on her back
he kneels between her thighs
seeing her lush florid portal
by her nectar shimmering
he draws a long stuttered breath
so overcome by the marvelous sight
and made dizzy by her inebriating scent
she giggles as he runs his tongue
across the full length of her folds
a surge of electricity
pulses through her body
as he massages and sucks on her pearl
her screams of ecstasy
shock the night air
Wholly focused
on giving her profound pleasure
with one hand pressing on her pelvis
he plunges two fingers deep
into her wet, pink paradise
her thighs encircle and hold him
with a vise-like grip
as with every thrust
he guides her ever closer
to orgasmic Nirvana
by her fever pitched moans
he knows she is close
under his hand her pelvis
suddenly shudders
He rushes to kiss her smiling lips
blanketing her body with his
gazing into her still ecstatic eyes
he whispers
“Mistress I must leave you now
soon to come again
when if my Goddess still desires
I will enter in”
Published 17th Aug 2014
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17th Aug 2014 10:14am
My. My. Gahddess_Worship. Luv. :-*
You have outdone yourself! This is quite the erotic masterpiece you have created here.
Thank you, luv, for such a delicious and wonderful tribute to my Wanton Goddess. ;-*
You have outdone yourself! This is quite the erotic masterpiece you have created here.
Thank you, luv, for such a delicious and wonderful tribute to my Wanton Goddess. ;-*
20th Aug 2014 9:08am
I am honored, Savaja, that you like this piece...I had impeccable inspiration.
17th Aug 2014 11:12pm
Enchanting union. Sultry and vividly erotic. And such a wonderful display of inspiration. - bravo!
20th Aug 2014 9:10am
Thank you Blue. It was a electrifying sensual experience writing this piece. T am very pleased that you like the piece.
18th Aug 2014 6:25am
20th Aug 2014 9:13am
Thank you Rayann for such a wonderful, if not hyperbolic comment. I enjoyed very much writing this piece and I am honored that it in some way moved you.
18th Aug 2014 4:36pm
20th Aug 2014 9:14am
Tommie, it always brightens my day to know that you have read and enjoyed one of my poems :) Thank you so much.
31st Aug 2014 9:07pm
Oh, what an opulent feast for the senses! Inspiring use of words, classy and exciting.
1st Sep 2014 2:41am
I am thrilled, exhilarated and encouraged by your words. I am glad, that though the piece long, it held your interest. I am honored that you enjoy my work.