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Nostalgia Serynu
A familiar breeze,
an old drawn bridge left to rot
I smell nostalgia.
Note:
I am not sure why this was posted with the train left to rot.
it was suppose to read as it is now.
an old drawn bridge left to rot
I smell nostalgia.
Note:
I am not sure why this was posted with the train left to rot.
it was suppose to read as it is now.
Written by
Zazzles
(Elderwoman)
Published 17th Aug 2014
| Edited 19th Aug 2014
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Re: Nostalgia.
17th Aug 2014 10:57pm
Re: Nostalgia.
18th Aug 2014 00:21am
re: re: Re: Nostalgia.
20th Aug 2014 3:42am
No problem doll! It did work well with the train, though, but I'll pretend it's a train bridge/trestle now. He he! <3
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Re: Nostalgia.
18th Aug 2014 00:24am
There's no place like home!!
I Like trains!!
Awesome lil piece Jackie!!!
Love the read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
I Like trains!!
Awesome lil piece Jackie!!!
Love the read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
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19th Aug 2014 9:08am
Re: Nostalgia.
18th Aug 2014 2:45am
I liked this , short, but powerful imagery , your work is always great \'o'/
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Re: Nostalgia.
18th Aug 2014 3:53pm
A sentimental longing of the happy memories in your life really creates a wonderful nostalgic feeling, especially when you're thinking about your place of birth...great write Broomie!
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
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Re: Nostalgia Serynu
19th Aug 2014 7:01pm