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Doormat - Senryu
I’ll leave you right now
Seek for another doormat
Try a bed of nails
Seek for another doormat
Try a bed of nails
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 16th Aug 2014
| Edited 17th Aug 2014
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Re: Doormat - Senryu
16th Aug 2014 9:45pm
Chiyo, luv :-* ~
This is splendid! Magnificent! I adore it and you are a goddess! :-*
This is splendid! Magnificent! I adore it and you are a goddess! :-*
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re: Re: Doormat - Senryu
16th Aug 2014 9:56pm
That's so sweet of you, Savaja :-)! You made me laugh our loud since your comment is such a wild outburst and makes me really happy :-). Thank you so much, dear. xo
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16th Aug 2014 10:58pm
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17th Aug 2014 00:26am
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17th Aug 2014 00:34am
Your opinion always means a lot to me, Paul, since you are the unchallenged master of double entendre :-).
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17th Aug 2014 3:06am
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17th Aug 2014 1:00pm
Glad you like it and humbled by your kind words, John. Will start to read through you latest poems since I feel refreshed and creative again to savor them :-).
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18th Aug 2014 9:57pm
Oh no! Just expressing things a little too spiky sometimes :-). Thanks a lot for the 'sharp wit and mind'. I feel honored by your kind comment!
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19th Aug 2014 8:37pm
Damn! Ouch! :)
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21st Aug 2014 7:38pm
Humbled by your kind words, WriterMoe :-). Thanks for saying so very nice things about my haiku. It is always a challenge for me to zip the information I'd like to convey.
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