deepundergroundpoetry.com
Ode to Selfie {Ivankita}
Now here I am looking cute in my hat,
now here I am, looking cute like that,
"in spades of truth, it’s her selfless wear,
Ivankita is sharing her sun sprayed hair,"
now this is me, with me grace that states,
I’m completely put out by this pretty face,
great, what wrong's this thing? foto fate;
take the picture hand, my friends they wait.
U. Ivankita: Stanford University,
Civil and Environmental Engineering
now here I am, looking cute like that,
"in spades of truth, it’s her selfless wear,
Ivankita is sharing her sun sprayed hair,"
now this is me, with me grace that states,
I’m completely put out by this pretty face,
great, what wrong's this thing? foto fate;
take the picture hand, my friends they wait.
U. Ivankita: Stanford University,
Civil and Environmental Engineering
Published 15th Aug 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 7
reads 59
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
15th Aug 2014 12:57pm
Its hard talking about the greater society here because of the intimidation factor(gene pools). I wanted this one to be fun, or stop and make you think at least, or maybe both. There are already statues in parks of the graven image of "selfie". I thought it deserved an Ode. Thank you Paul. You keep doing what you do. Your comments strike me much of the time as Confucius.
15th Aug 2014 4:57pm
iyam shellfish selfy......a cancercrab moonychild allaa'lone, 'using' myself to mock The Vanities!!!
no one better
n'or worser
t'be picktur
tooken of...
a gemsparkle brite of [w]rite, dear
(pleas, would like see mo'piktur of You)
It took a lot of courage to show you that(DL). I hate pictures, and I'll say no more... Godbless all the Giorgiones and Debutantes and all their confident mocks. Let'em have it, I think its fun. You are so silly...:) That woman in the picture has been one of my greatest inspirations in what a confident woman should be. You could never see it here though, not in one shot anyway. She is filled with love and kindness and she's awesome for letting me use her image. She is so much fun.
15th Aug 2014 7:44pm
15th Aug 2014 9:40pm
I like picturesque idealism and word imagery. The more we read, you know... Thank's for reading xmar. :)
16th Aug 2014 3:49am
it's a bold brazen look, completely tailored for her, & it shines like the sunlight. the entire presentation is utterly fascinating...
