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Uncertainty
Bloody fists fly
Impacts loud with groans of pain
Two pair non-stop
A prize fight of epic proportions
Anger and spit flying across
The open air like rain
Blood spattered feathers shaking
Reptilian crimson scales clicking
Like nails raking against each other
No weakness in their assault
Determination on their mind
Hatred in their eyes
They hurl themselves
Against each other
Claws raking, ripping flesh open
Immortal lust from the beginning of time
Engrained hatred all encompassing
Spurs them on to win
I stand in awe
Frozen blank stare
Unable to decide
Impacts loud with groans of pain
Two pair non-stop
A prize fight of epic proportions
Anger and spit flying across
The open air like rain
Blood spattered feathers shaking
Reptilian crimson scales clicking
Like nails raking against each other
No weakness in their assault
Determination on their mind
Hatred in their eyes
They hurl themselves
Against each other
Claws raking, ripping flesh open
Immortal lust from the beginning of time
Engrained hatred all encompassing
Spurs them on to win
I stand in awe
Frozen blank stare
Unable to decide
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15th Aug 2014 7:00pm
Well it's a fight between my angel and my little devil. I can't decide so they keep on fighting. That would be a wicked twist though.
Re: Unceratainty
I'm uncertain. It is a fight but what kind of fight? For me it has no sexual but an emotional background. Two lovers which fight to free themselves from each other, their last (perhaps) struggles before they're finally done. I read your poem several times, it touches me deeply.
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15th Aug 2014 7:01pm
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15th Aug 2014 7:02pm
It's the little angel and the little devil on my shoulders who are fighting trying to sway my decision.
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Re: Unceratainty
15th Aug 2014 3:36am
X dear friend i see it as a fight with inner turmoil. Ones own struggle with their doubts n fears.
Excellent n descriptive write.
Xoxoxo
Belle
Excellent n descriptive write.
Xoxoxo
Belle
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15th Aug 2014 7:05pm
Yes inner turmoil. The struggle with good and evil. My decision delays and the fight continues. Good read Belle.
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15th Aug 2014 9:23pm
Goes to show i pay close attention to everything u say dear friend. Plus as u know we r alot alike
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15th Aug 2014 7:07pm
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15th Aug 2014 7:06pm
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16th Aug 2014 4:25pm
Muscular and uncompromising - the viewer dispassionate - great write on the only debate - the fact u wrote it puts my money on our feathered friend
Maybe a typo in the title
Maybe a typo in the title
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18th Aug 2014 8:58pm
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17th Aug 2014 2:00pm
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19th Aug 2014 5:59pm
re: Re: Uncertainty
25th Aug 2014 10:54pm
I wanted it to be fast paced just like my decision. Quick and relatively painless.