deepundergroundpoetry.com
There's Nothing Like The Real Thing
Did you come here for love?
To fall hard for pretty words?
A name with no face tells you
what you want to hear and you believe
That makes you a sucker
The world is right outside
Grab it and growl
Stop festering about your loneliness
You want to fuck
Stop fucking yourself
You want to get fucked
Close your fake cyber fantasy land
And go get fucked
Come back and tell us all about it
Anyway, that's what I'd do
To fall hard for pretty words?
A name with no face tells you
what you want to hear and you believe
That makes you a sucker
The world is right outside
Grab it and growl
Stop festering about your loneliness
You want to fuck
Stop fucking yourself
You want to get fucked
Close your fake cyber fantasy land
And go get fucked
Come back and tell us all about it
Anyway, that's what I'd do
Published 13th Aug 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 0
comments 21
reads 91
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
13th Aug 2014 9:44pm
Yes there is no substitute for the real thing. Beautiful interaction between adults. Good write.
13th Aug 2014 10:15pm
You got that right xmar82. It's in our nature to touch and feel, yes...sometimes we have to do it to ourselves but for heaven's sake not until we die! Life's too short to sit and wait for someone that's never going to show.
Like I said, grab it and growl.
Thanks for reading :-)
Like I said, grab it and growl.
Thanks for reading :-)
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:45am
13th Aug 2014 9:52pm
<< post removed >>
13th Aug 2014 10:24pm
Don't get me wrong. This cyber shit can be fun, gives us all a little tickle...but serving oneself gets old. Everyone needs hands on! Thanks tornado :-)
13th Aug 2014 11:31pm
And some of us cum here for a vacation from the real thing!!!!!lol
Too much real sex makes you go CRAZY, man! Lol
Too much real sex makes you go CRAZY, man! Lol
14th Aug 2014 00:29am
Ok...who are you and what have you done with Hawkdude?That's hilarious Hawkdude...There's no such thing as too much. ;-) (-;
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
14th Aug 2014 00:14am
<< post removed >>
14th Aug 2014 00:29am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 5:40pm
14th Aug 2014 1:04am
<< post removed >>
14th Aug 2014 1:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
14th Aug 2014 1:21pm
<< post removed >>
14th Aug 2014 1:52pm
14th Aug 2014 10:22pm
14th Aug 2014 10:32pm
14th Aug 2014 10:40pm
15th Aug 2014 1:35pm
15th Aug 2014 7:17am
HaHaHa Tommie Girl...love your advice!!! GRRRRRR!!! LOL!!! Please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
15th Aug 2014 1:36pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
15th Aug 2014 5:29pm
<< post removed >>
16th Aug 2014 1:40pm
You always make me smile Jack.
No, not everything is black and white.
I've had several conversations with other poets
and most of them are sad...sit and wait, wait and sit.
For what? Get the hell out there and have fun, be happy.
In reality, that one person that they're waiting on
isn't waiting for them...
Touch and be touched! It feels wicked good! ;)
Thanks for your wonderful comment!
No, not everything is black and white.
I've had several conversations with other poets
and most of them are sad...sit and wait, wait and sit.
For what? Get the hell out there and have fun, be happy.
In reality, that one person that they're waiting on
isn't waiting for them...
Touch and be touched! It feels wicked good! ;)
Thanks for your wonderful comment!
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
19th Aug 2014 10:02pm
<< post removed >>