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The Brick House {entered in the Childhood Home Comp}
everything meticulously kept
beautiful trees and gardens enveloped the
hard exterior
everything always looked
good from the outside
we were the perfect
white middle class family
it was the times
that what happened
inside, stayed inside
yes, we had the perfect white picket fence
to the back yard
the gate that squeaked whenever
you tried to sneak in late
hop scotch in the driveway
kickball in the street
all the neighborhood kids
somehow ended up in our yard
the beautiful dogwood trees I was
not allowed to climb
but what my parents
did not know couldn't hurt them
or me, a lesson i managed to learn
on a frequent basis
i got my first kiss in that dogwood tree
i said my first swear word there
when a small chunk of bark fell
off and landed in my eye as i swung from
it's branches
the green lush lawn that we would
do cartwheels on
and play tag, hide and seek
my older sister and her friends
not wanting me to tag along
had me be "it" in hide and seek
so they could sneak away into town
leaving me to hunt for them longer
than I'd care to mention
the five brick stairs that went up to the house
that my mom fell down one day in anger
when my sister and I did not answer the
dinner bell to come inside
cutting her leg open and leaving a scar
she still has today
the hard lesson we learned
when those infamous words were spoken
wait till your father comes home
meant a serious punishment
and one that was carried out
without hesitation
it was the first and last time
my father ever had to spank me
i was six
after that any punishment
was dutifully carried out by my mother
whose favorite tool was her wooden spoon
i was hit with that more than I'd care to mention
in her eyes I was always her trouble
with a capital "T"
so I learned to stay away
and hide away where she could
not reach me
my sisters room on the top floor
had a door that opened up to the
balcony that was actually the roof
to our garage
it was surrounded by a low fence
and covered in black tar
in the summer months you could fry an
egg out there or ourselves which
happened quite often
none of our friends were allowed
up there, but as I said what my parents
did not know…
i often climbed out the bedroom window
and rested against the wall, listening to music
or reading out there staying out of sight
being all girls how much trouble
could we possibly get in?
I was daddy's girl through and through
and I had him wrapped around my pinky solid
which put even more of a strain on my
relationship with my mom
who got it in her warped head
that at the age of 15 I must be a slut
which she brought to my
attention when she learned a boy had
asked me out…i got the double barrel of her anger then
tongue and hands as soon as I walked in the door
because I came home one minute over curfew
after that she seemed to find any excuse
to get physical with me
i learned when to come and go
to avoid her wrath
hanging out in large groups of friends
going to school and being the dutiful daughter
following all the rules as far as my parents knew
that is
by the time I turned 17
I was quite finished with
the whole scenario
our family was an illusion
the perfect lie
i moved half way through my senior year
of high school to live with my aunt
because anything had to be better than this
so many memories, but not all of them bad
the best years of my childhood
happened before the age of ten…
those are the ones I prefer to remember
I walked away and never looked back
beautiful trees and gardens enveloped the
hard exterior
everything always looked
good from the outside
we were the perfect
white middle class family
it was the times
that what happened
inside, stayed inside
yes, we had the perfect white picket fence
to the back yard
the gate that squeaked whenever
you tried to sneak in late
hop scotch in the driveway
kickball in the street
all the neighborhood kids
somehow ended up in our yard
the beautiful dogwood trees I was
not allowed to climb
but what my parents
did not know couldn't hurt them
or me, a lesson i managed to learn
on a frequent basis
i got my first kiss in that dogwood tree
i said my first swear word there
when a small chunk of bark fell
off and landed in my eye as i swung from
it's branches
the green lush lawn that we would
do cartwheels on
and play tag, hide and seek
my older sister and her friends
not wanting me to tag along
had me be "it" in hide and seek
so they could sneak away into town
leaving me to hunt for them longer
than I'd care to mention
the five brick stairs that went up to the house
that my mom fell down one day in anger
when my sister and I did not answer the
dinner bell to come inside
cutting her leg open and leaving a scar
she still has today
the hard lesson we learned
when those infamous words were spoken
wait till your father comes home
meant a serious punishment
and one that was carried out
without hesitation
it was the first and last time
my father ever had to spank me
i was six
after that any punishment
was dutifully carried out by my mother
whose favorite tool was her wooden spoon
i was hit with that more than I'd care to mention
in her eyes I was always her trouble
with a capital "T"
so I learned to stay away
and hide away where she could
not reach me
my sisters room on the top floor
had a door that opened up to the
balcony that was actually the roof
to our garage
it was surrounded by a low fence
and covered in black tar
in the summer months you could fry an
egg out there or ourselves which
happened quite often
none of our friends were allowed
up there, but as I said what my parents
did not know…
i often climbed out the bedroom window
and rested against the wall, listening to music
or reading out there staying out of sight
being all girls how much trouble
could we possibly get in?
I was daddy's girl through and through
and I had him wrapped around my pinky solid
which put even more of a strain on my
relationship with my mom
who got it in her warped head
that at the age of 15 I must be a slut
which she brought to my
attention when she learned a boy had
asked me out…i got the double barrel of her anger then
tongue and hands as soon as I walked in the door
because I came home one minute over curfew
after that she seemed to find any excuse
to get physical with me
i learned when to come and go
to avoid her wrath
hanging out in large groups of friends
going to school and being the dutiful daughter
following all the rules as far as my parents knew
that is
by the time I turned 17
I was quite finished with
the whole scenario
our family was an illusion
the perfect lie
i moved half way through my senior year
of high school to live with my aunt
because anything had to be better than this
so many memories, but not all of them bad
the best years of my childhood
happened before the age of ten…
those are the ones I prefer to remember
I walked away and never looked back
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