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Like no other Love...
I've toiled like a pauper...
a beggart for even a morsel of love
worked my sensitivities,
for soul guidance from above
I've seen you appear
like an apparition in my dreams
But, "why can't you SEE ME!?"
an internal plea screams...
Why will love not taste me?
for my flavor is pure
feel the essence of a heart
when secure, strong and sure...
Hold, my song to your breast
hear it's melody just for you,
I'll be forsaking all the rest...
Relish this love like no other,
deep beats this battered heart
for you, removed from my chest...
just hold cautious, with it never part...
See, I'm still a bit broken
This fragile flesh, my cloth
drenched from tears soaking
and yet still prayerful and willing
so saunter not into a relation,
unless, it's with the sincerest of feeling...
a beggart for even a morsel of love
worked my sensitivities,
for soul guidance from above
I've seen you appear
like an apparition in my dreams
But, "why can't you SEE ME!?"
an internal plea screams...
Why will love not taste me?
for my flavor is pure
feel the essence of a heart
when secure, strong and sure...
Hold, my song to your breast
hear it's melody just for you,
I'll be forsaking all the rest...
Relish this love like no other,
deep beats this battered heart
for you, removed from my chest...
just hold cautious, with it never part...
See, I'm still a bit broken
This fragile flesh, my cloth
drenched from tears soaking
and yet still prayerful and willing
so saunter not into a relation,
unless, it's with the sincerest of feeling...
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Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 00:13am
To have a brief perfection in the words 'I love you'...it is like no other love. Good read, Poetik.
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re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 4:34am
Thank you my sweet Grace... So wonderful you are :)
Truly appreciate you always! :)
Truly appreciate you always! :)
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re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 4:35am
I'm so humbled n deeply grateful for your words bro. Can't thank you enough for all your support :)
re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 4:37am
Yes it does, but I'm grateful for your support n sweet spirit my dear lady... Grateful as always I am for your continued support.... :)
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re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 4:38am
Aaaawwww how sweet of you n HER... I'm moved beyond words that you've responded in this way... Thank you sweetness, always n forever will I treasure you :)
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10th Aug 2014 4:52am
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10th Aug 2014 1:22pm
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10th Aug 2014 9:38am
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re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 1:31pm
Sweet Miki, your insight is so outstanding n I value your words n support always my dear... Thank you! :)
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10th Aug 2014 1:19pm
re: Re: Like no other Love...
10th Aug 2014 1:32pm
A ton of thanks to you my dear bro! Honored
to have your continued support :)
to have your continued support :)
Re: Like no other Love...
11th Aug 2014 3:50pm
Cry of loneliness....god this is so relevant. A loneliness that only a certain touch can cure. Passionate write dude.
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11th Aug 2014 6:06pm
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re: Re: Like no other Love...
12th Aug 2014 5:15am
Aaaawww thank you sweet flower... I'm happy to hear from you n for your support always :)