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BLISS
Through the dark and the granite streets and
Darker rain, I ran to the foot of Castle Peak,
Where hate filled battles were lost and won
And pipers echoed.
With child hands and rock feet, I climbed,
To slide as hoped-for-strides fell short and failed
And fingers grabbed air, in prayer, to fall or fly
As I held fast.
Held, beneath the thunderous ephemeral cloud.
Above the cloud's gloom shadow; I am cliff face,
Rock melt, rain drop, a light shard of the coming sun,
Not up nor down.
Adrenalin poised on a precipice, resigned to fate.
The tortured town and pipers lament still calling.
Ahead in the castle keep, a love, I keep, is calling.
Calling me ahead.
Yet Joy and Peace enter me.
Enter me in the name of Grace
And there in me multiply.
Flow on anon to all sentient souls;
A finger-hold on a moment,
Balanced in the land of bliss.
Darker rain, I ran to the foot of Castle Peak,
Where hate filled battles were lost and won
And pipers echoed.
With child hands and rock feet, I climbed,
To slide as hoped-for-strides fell short and failed
And fingers grabbed air, in prayer, to fall or fly
As I held fast.
Held, beneath the thunderous ephemeral cloud.
Above the cloud's gloom shadow; I am cliff face,
Rock melt, rain drop, a light shard of the coming sun,
Not up nor down.
Adrenalin poised on a precipice, resigned to fate.
The tortured town and pipers lament still calling.
Ahead in the castle keep, a love, I keep, is calling.
Calling me ahead.
Yet Joy and Peace enter me.
Enter me in the name of Grace
And there in me multiply.
Flow on anon to all sentient souls;
A finger-hold on a moment,
Balanced in the land of bliss.
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 3:44pm
9th Aug 2014 11:24pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
9th Aug 2014 11:54pm
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10th Aug 2014 00:08am
that's great Mags - I've been wandering around Scotland in the rain - glad the wondering was not in vain
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10th Aug 2014 00:28am
I've never been to Scotland,
but mountains and swirling
mists and the peace found
in such a landscape, well
I've felt similar in walking
holidays in Wales and
among the ruins of Carreg
Cennan and such like...
but mountains and swirling
mists and the peace found
in such a landscape, well
I've felt similar in walking
holidays in Wales and
among the ruins of Carreg
Cennan and such like...
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10th Aug 2014 7:50am
Thanks Dartford and glad you could see - the Carreg Cennan - very similar to Castle Peak as it was built for a Scotsman
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
10th Aug 2014 1:38am
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10th Aug 2014 7:53am
That's so kind Vee - somewhere between holding on and letting go - we get the present - and then we forget it to find it again
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:52pm
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10th Aug 2014 11:17am
That was weird - I was just reading you as you were reading me - glad you liked it MM :) thanks
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10th Aug 2014 11:26am
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:09pm
11th Aug 2014 3:33am
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11th Aug 2014 3:55am
Yes - the progression - excellent SW - I love your careful reading.
On grammar it was for a long time neither and now it's not. Not good.
Am still thinking this one - not is so emphatic
On grammar it was for a long time neither and now it's not. Not good.
Am still thinking this one - not is so emphatic
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
11th Aug 2014 11:31am
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11th Aug 2014 7:56pm
that's right Xmar - may be there's more that all I know - thanks again for your read