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Mother's Quilt
I took her clothes; I cut them piece by piece
in the tiny patterns to be, from her soul,
woven razors in dainty hankies
for every tear that touched her cheek,
reminding me of a golden locket
where she kept her potted rouge, it sheds colors
of reddened haze that makes my heart bleed,
I cast the batting, stitch by stitch she had shown me;
my mother’s quilt, I reach for it in comfort,
it is a treasure, I hold it at times – I fall asleep.
in the tiny patterns to be, from her soul,
woven razors in dainty hankies
for every tear that touched her cheek,
reminding me of a golden locket
where she kept her potted rouge, it sheds colors
of reddened haze that makes my heart bleed,
I cast the batting, stitch by stitch she had shown me;
my mother’s quilt, I reach for it in comfort,
it is a treasure, I hold it at times – I fall asleep.
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Re: Mother's Quilt
8th Aug 2014 5:20pm
Re: Mother's Quilt
8th Aug 2014 5:48pm
Re: Mother's Quilt
8th Aug 2014 8:15pm
Ahhh Pishashee, luv :-* ~
Such bittersweet ambivalence. We cannot help but love them...and bleed a bit. So very many layers with family betimes... :-*
Such bittersweet ambivalence. We cannot help but love them...and bleed a bit. So very many layers with family betimes... :-*
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re: Re: Mother's Quilt
9th Aug 2014 00:57am
Re: Mother's Quilt
9th Aug 2014 1:15pm
My grandmother and her sister were quilters ... There was something magical about watching them sit in their sewing circle at church - conversations peppered with their Gullah accents ... those blankets do make you bleed but in the best ways ...
... Wonderful write!
... Wonderful write!
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re: Re: Mother's Quilt
9th Aug 2014 3:35pm
Re: Mother's Quilt
9th Aug 2014 11:23pm
A phenomenal metaphor
and a really great opening line - everything is there -- excellent
do we become our parents?
and a really great opening line - everything is there -- excellent
do we become our parents?
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re: Re: Mother's Quilt
10th Aug 2014 8:08am
There is horror in that question for me. But in the end it wouldn't be such a bad thing, afterall, they were just good and simple people that worked too damn hard. Thank you so much whale.