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A poem is a poem, no matter how small
Bigger isn't always better
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
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6th Aug 2014 5:58pm
Sometimes less is better as the dogma in architecture...good read Tommie Lynn!
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6th Aug 2014 6:45pm
But few words she wrote
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
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6th Aug 2014 7:21pm
I was told long, long ago...
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
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8th Aug 2014 1:19am
The long ones are great! I just feel I lose what I've already read by the time I reach the end...but that just means I need to focus more...lol
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)