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Weaving
Spiderwebs in my hair
In my nose
In my eyes
In my thoughts
Spidersilk
Everywhere
Tangled
Body enwrapped
Round and round
Darkness encroaches
Lethe's waters deep
Encloaks
Enshrouds
Webcrafter's
Final
Sleep
In my nose
In my eyes
In my thoughts
Spidersilk
Everywhere
Tangled
Body enwrapped
Round and round
Darkness encroaches
Lethe's waters deep
Encloaks
Enshrouds
Webcrafter's
Final
Sleep
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
5th Aug 2014 3:52am
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Re: Weaving
5th Aug 2014 5:05am
Okay now you've got me tingling in a drastically different way...goose-pimples (Yay! pimples at my age) any way spiders are the creepiest and navigating the waters of Hades is not on my bucket list nor is it on my kick-the-bucket list :)
A good and spooky one.
A good and spooky one.
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5th Aug 2014 5:11am
Sometimes, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*, as surely you must know for the Goddess has her Dark Aspect, the darkness beckons...
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5th Aug 2014 5:18am
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Oct 2019 1:35am
5th Aug 2014 5:13am
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5th Aug 2014 5:32am
Somehow, Samantha, luv :-*, I'm gleaning the barest intimation of, no, the subtlest hint, no, could it be the sheerest whisper of innuendo? ;-)
You couldn't possibly be referring to, dare I say? I shan't. I shall: milkweed sap - that insidious substance DOES get everywhere, into the crevices, up inside, deep, where it counts. Hear tell, it can contribute to deep sleep as well... :-*
You couldn't possibly be referring to, dare I say? I shan't. I shall: milkweed sap - that insidious substance DOES get everywhere, into the crevices, up inside, deep, where it counts. Hear tell, it can contribute to deep sleep as well... :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 5:40pm
5th Aug 2014 10:44am
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5th Aug 2014 4:07pm
Re: Weaving
5th Aug 2014 12:47pm
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5th Aug 2014 4:12pm
Thank you very much, indeed, Pishashee, luv :-*. I am greatly honored by your praise, peerless Poetess, and even more so by your love for this poem, luv. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
5th Aug 2014 1:57pm
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5th Aug 2014 4:29pm
Ahhh, Jack Tex, luv :-* ~
Librettos. Hmmm...
Sometimes, you make me speechless, quite, quite surprised by what you say regarding my works.
This is one of those times.
I have nothing clever to say, nor wise or considered.
As for the other: not exactly low-key and not exactly wild, rather a grey area of both; that's probably rather astute of you for there are strands of both lurking...
Isn't that true of all of us, though, that multifaceted layering, the multiparous selves we constantly birth into being, each part of the whole, the one? (Or, this could just be the fever speaking... :-p)
Librettos. Hmmm...
Sometimes, you make me speechless, quite, quite surprised by what you say regarding my works.
This is one of those times.
I have nothing clever to say, nor wise or considered.
As for the other: not exactly low-key and not exactly wild, rather a grey area of both; that's probably rather astute of you for there are strands of both lurking...
Isn't that true of all of us, though, that multifaceted layering, the multiparous selves we constantly birth into being, each part of the whole, the one? (Or, this could just be the fever speaking... :-p)
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
5th Aug 2014 4:30pm
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re: Re: Weaving
5th Aug 2014 4:51pm
Thank you very, very much Snowcrystal, luv :-*. Such high praise from you is always cause for great celebration, Mistress of the Poem. :-*
Re: Weaving
5th Aug 2014 11:04pm
Masterful brilliance, even when revealing your dark side, Savaja.
I really like the motif within this little well woven web.
Excellence!
I really like the motif within this little well woven web.
Excellence!
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re: Re: Weaving
6th Aug 2014 00:40am
Thank you very much, VegasPoet, luv :-*.
Oh, what tangled webs we weave...
Thank you, again, for your keen perception, Sir! You are always such a distinct pleasure to have over, luv. :-*
Oh, what tangled webs we weave...
Thank you, again, for your keen perception, Sir! You are always such a distinct pleasure to have over, luv. :-*
Re: Weaving
6th Aug 2014 3:34am
re: Re: Weaving
6th Aug 2014 5:19am
Thank you, Fireglacier, luv. :-*. Catching your attention is always a privilege, luv. Glad I am to have you stop by for a visit. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
9th Aug 2014 7:06pm
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re: Re: Weaving
9th Aug 2014 8:03pm
Thank you very much, Magdalena, luv :-*.
Curiously enough, it was the web crafting that fascinated me far more with this piece than the web crafters... :-*
Curiously enough, it was the web crafting that fascinated me far more with this piece than the web crafters... :-*