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Driver
red light
I run it sometimes
take chances
advances
stay one step behind
your shadow
your next turn
your progress
its all a test
that heart beat gets crazy
when you're running
and stumble
in presence
feeling reborn
sipping coffee
alone
green light
resembles my eyes
getting caught up
with passerby's
intimidated
resorting to Sunday
it use to be fun
out on the highway
gun fire
I run it sometimes
take chances
advances
stay one step behind
your shadow
your next turn
your progress
its all a test
that heart beat gets crazy
when you're running
and stumble
in presence
feeling reborn
sipping coffee
alone
green light
resembles my eyes
getting caught up
with passerby's
intimidated
resorting to Sunday
it use to be fun
out on the highway
gun fire
Published 4th Aug 2014
| Edited 6th Aug 2014
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11th Aug 2014 5:12am
Sounds a bit unbound, wild, free, liked it
except I'm not sure about the gunfire part. It seems a bit
out of place, still I liked the imagery throughout :)
except I'm not sure about the gunfire part. It seems a bit
out of place, still I liked the imagery throughout :)
12th Aug 2014 5:03am
The gun fire at the end refers to what has evolved into "road rage"... There never use to be such a thing years ago.
thank you =)
thank you =)
