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love(crush) from one of the competitions .....
Write a poem from a gay teenagers perspective at least 7 stanzas and no other rules.
---------love (crush)----------------------
School was a drag until they changed my classes.
Second period was full so now Math is with, who?
Ah, I was expecting the usual, but, now....
Everyday I'm anticipating that hour near you.
I guess it should be wrong that I want to smell her.
Why is it wrong if she doesn't mind?
I hope a day comes that I can simply tell her
the feelings I have
I am sure of
define:
love.
I know some girls that are funny or cute.
Some of them get hung up on guys.
But this one is beaming -
she keeps me dreaming-
I wonder if she'll ever realize:
love.
Tomorrow I think I will try to be brave.
I'll pass her a note but leave out my name.
I'll ask her to tell me what she prefers better-
a girl or a guy or both or whatever!
I try to say "Hi" after class .
I feel like I'm obvious or that she thinks I'm fake.
Somehow, I have to figure this out
before she hooks up with someone else by mistake.
If I close my eyes, I can almost see her.
She looks so hot with her long bronze hair.
If my parents knew I had a crush on a girl,
I would be so busted but I don't care.
I just can't wait to hit school tomorrow.
Mom is so proud that I never miss a day.
Even sick like a dog, I have to go see her.
Don't ask whats came over me because I'll say:
love.
---------love (crush)----------------------
School was a drag until they changed my classes.
Second period was full so now Math is with, who?
Ah, I was expecting the usual, but, now....
Everyday I'm anticipating that hour near you.
I guess it should be wrong that I want to smell her.
Why is it wrong if she doesn't mind?
I hope a day comes that I can simply tell her
the feelings I have
I am sure of
define:
love.
I know some girls that are funny or cute.
Some of them get hung up on guys.
But this one is beaming -
she keeps me dreaming-
I wonder if she'll ever realize:
love.
Tomorrow I think I will try to be brave.
I'll pass her a note but leave out my name.
I'll ask her to tell me what she prefers better-
a girl or a guy or both or whatever!
I try to say "Hi" after class .
I feel like I'm obvious or that she thinks I'm fake.
Somehow, I have to figure this out
before she hooks up with someone else by mistake.
If I close my eyes, I can almost see her.
She looks so hot with her long bronze hair.
If my parents knew I had a crush on a girl,
I would be so busted but I don't care.
I just can't wait to hit school tomorrow.
Mom is so proud that I never miss a day.
Even sick like a dog, I have to go see her.
Don't ask whats came over me because I'll say:
love.
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