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Let You Go
Hope it hurts you
When i say i don't love you anymore
Hope it kills you
When i say i don't want you around me
Hope it makes you wanna cry
When i say i have nothing to say to you
Hope you die little
When i say nothing at all
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
And now you must be thinking
Why would i wish all the pain upon you
You must be probably thinking
If i ever loved
I wouldn't say these things to you
Because one can never really see their love fall apart
Well the reason i am saying all of this
Is so that maybe you would feel bad for everything
It might want you to want me back
Though i am sure as hell
You're soulless now
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
Oh baby just turn around
All this pain you put me through
Just made me love you more
Cause i just got to know now
I would give my heart and soul
But i won't let you go
No i can't let you go
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
When i say i don't love you anymore
Hope it kills you
When i say i don't want you around me
Hope it makes you wanna cry
When i say i have nothing to say to you
Hope you die little
When i say nothing at all
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
And now you must be thinking
Why would i wish all the pain upon you
You must be probably thinking
If i ever loved
I wouldn't say these things to you
Because one can never really see their love fall apart
Well the reason i am saying all of this
Is so that maybe you would feel bad for everything
It might want you to want me back
Though i am sure as hell
You're soulless now
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
Oh baby just turn around
All this pain you put me through
Just made me love you more
Cause i just got to know now
I would give my heart and soul
But i won't let you go
No i can't let you go
The way i am treating you
Does it do anything to you
I just want you to know
This is all that happened to me
When you broke us apart
When you tore us apart
When you said it's over and you are tired
Maybe it's just me who is still wired around you
But i honestly hope you'd feel the same shit i did
Published 1st Aug 2014
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
1st Aug 2014 5:57pm
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1st Aug 2014 7:16pm
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2nd Aug 2014 2:26am
14th Aug 2014 8:00am
It's good to mark off your lyrics
For instance on the first part of the song
You would label the first set of lines "Verse 1"
And then the next we of lyrics that you repeated would be the "chorus"
For the chorus you can just write down the chorus
And then when you repeat the chorus
You can just write down chorus, instead of writing the whole chorus
Cause the person reading it already knows the lyrics after seeing the same thing
Unless you extend the chorus
But I'm all for unstructured songs
It's cool to see lyrics in its raw form instead of being organized
For instance on the first part of the song
You would label the first set of lines "Verse 1"
And then the next we of lyrics that you repeated would be the "chorus"
For the chorus you can just write down the chorus
And then when you repeat the chorus
You can just write down chorus, instead of writing the whole chorus
Cause the person reading it already knows the lyrics after seeing the same thing
Unless you extend the chorus
But I'm all for unstructured songs
It's cool to see lyrics in its raw form instead of being organized
14th Aug 2014 8:16am
Thankyou for the tip. I appreciate it :)
I don't like marking the lyrics and also i like to write the complete chorus over again instead of just writing chorus. idk i feel like in that way the lyrics are incomplete haha
I don't like marking the lyrics and also i like to write the complete chorus over again instead of just writing chorus. idk i feel like in that way the lyrics are incomplete haha