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You Were Once My World
You Were Once My World,
You Made Feel Perfect,And Worth It,
You Never Judged Me For The scars on My Skin,
You Were Once Mine,It Was Like There Was No Limit Of Time,
You Use To Shine Bright In My Sky,
You Comforted Me When I Cried And I Wanted To Die,
You Were Once My World,
I Showed You What was Left Of Me,A Broken Girl,
You Made Me Feel Perfect...And Told Me I was Worth It,
My World...Our World Came Crashing Down...Without a Sound..I Fell Hard on The Ground,
You Were Once Mine..It Was Like There was No Limit Of Time..
You Were The Shooting Star In My Dark Sky,
You Changed Everything..
You Were Once My World, You Made Me Feel Perfect,
My World..Came Crashing Down,Without a Sound..
I Fell Hard..And Shattered What Was Left Of My Fragile Heart..
You Were Once Mine
You Made Feel Perfect,And Worth It,
You Never Judged Me For The scars on My Skin,
You Were Once Mine,It Was Like There Was No Limit Of Time,
You Use To Shine Bright In My Sky,
You Comforted Me When I Cried And I Wanted To Die,
You Were Once My World,
I Showed You What was Left Of Me,A Broken Girl,
You Made Me Feel Perfect...And Told Me I was Worth It,
My World...Our World Came Crashing Down...Without a Sound..I Fell Hard on The Ground,
You Were Once Mine..It Was Like There was No Limit Of Time..
You Were The Shooting Star In My Dark Sky,
You Changed Everything..
You Were Once My World, You Made Me Feel Perfect,
My World..Came Crashing Down,Without a Sound..
I Fell Hard..And Shattered What Was Left Of My Fragile Heart..
You Were Once Mine
Published 1st Aug 2014
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1st Aug 2014 7:45am
why is this person no longer loved by you so much?--realize, that personally, i hate the idea of putting possessive words together with love.
but you haven't mentioned here why he or she has fallen out of favor with you. it's a passionate expression, but why? given previous poems by you, i'd have to say it's your...father?--no, this person seems to have been an actual love lost, in a way, not your father...but what happened to destroy such a beautiful thing as you say you lost, or rather, let go of, here?
but you haven't mentioned here why he or she has fallen out of favor with you. it's a passionate expression, but why? given previous poems by you, i'd have to say it's your...father?--no, this person seems to have been an actual love lost, in a way, not your father...but what happened to destroy such a beautiful thing as you say you lost, or rather, let go of, here?
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
1st Aug 2014 9:21am
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