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Tactical Brilliance
My eyes vacate the light,
there is a dignified thingy
that's within my reach;
I was suddenly aware of the hand
at the end of my short memory.
there is a dignified thingy
that's within my reach;
I was suddenly aware of the hand
at the end of my short memory.
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Re: Tactical Brilliance
31st Jul 2014 9:31pm
"there is a dignified thingy"
I laughed Reita, as usual with your wit...
Enjoyed...
I laughed Reita, as usual with your wit...
Enjoyed...
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re: Re: Tactical Brilliance
31st Jul 2014 9:59pm
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re: Re: Tactical Brilliance
The faceted iridescent plane times a million directions. I'm a gem collector; looking through the loop for inclusions. Thank you Jack, that's sweet of you.
Re: Tactical Brilliance
31st Jul 2014 11:46pm
I've got to hand it to you,
we're all in the grip of
a most fearful amnesia..:)
we're all in the grip of
a most fearful amnesia..:)
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re: Re: Tactical Brilliance
1st Aug 2014 4:06pm
I would say history repeats itself, but then I repeat myself. What we need is the whole world to hold hands while we're crossing the cosmos. Its good to see you.. :)
Re: Tactical Brilliance
1st Aug 2014 3:01am
Pishashee, luv :-* ~
I can see you again, impatient, looking up from the microscope (that's the pervasive image in my head), needing some tool to adjust the slide or the material on the slide, seeing it, realizing ah yes there's the oh-whatever-it-is, and then remembering that it's okay to use your hands for the tool, just not for the slide or the material on it... :-D
Of course, I just transformed the most magical poem into the mundane and you did quite the opposite, you poetic guru! :-*
I can see you again, impatient, looking up from the microscope (that's the pervasive image in my head), needing some tool to adjust the slide or the material on the slide, seeing it, realizing ah yes there's the oh-whatever-it-is, and then remembering that it's okay to use your hands for the tool, just not for the slide or the material on it... :-D
Of course, I just transformed the most magical poem into the mundane and you did quite the opposite, you poetic guru! :-*
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re: Re: Tactical Brilliance
1st Aug 2014 3:56pm
I'll tell you a secret,
and you might be surprised,
It was my very own "army"
as I opened my eyes...
and you might be surprised,
It was my very own "army"
as I opened my eyes...
re: re: Re: Tactical Brilliance
1st Aug 2014 4:41pm
Ah, luv :-* ~
You know me well, now, do you not? I will be pondering this for days... Mayhap, years... :-p
You know me well, now, do you not? I will be pondering this for days... Mayhap, years... :-p
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