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Dark Angel
She offers you an oasis
Away from desperation and solitude
Replace your bloody blade
With her soft and loving hands
Allow your dark Angel
To wrap you within her love
Each delicate ebony feather
Wiping away your salty tears
Allow her to kiss away
The scars of your tarnished soul
Slough away your calluses
Caused by endless broken dreams
Wrap your weary arms tightly around her
With the strength of a thousand vices
While she takes you on a magical flight
To where your worlds begin
Together you and your dark Angel
Arrive in your intertwined heavenly bliss
Of sin and purity combined
Where her love will keep you safe
Away from desperation and solitude
Replace your bloody blade
With her soft and loving hands
Allow your dark Angel
To wrap you within her love
Each delicate ebony feather
Wiping away your salty tears
Allow her to kiss away
The scars of your tarnished soul
Slough away your calluses
Caused by endless broken dreams
Wrap your weary arms tightly around her
With the strength of a thousand vices
While she takes you on a magical flight
To where your worlds begin
Together you and your dark Angel
Arrive in your intertwined heavenly bliss
Of sin and purity combined
Where her love will keep you safe
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Re: Dark Angel
31st Jul 2014 7:16pm
Reassuring write, of love and happiness with a warm loving companion. It gives hope to the hopeless. Great write Belle.
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re: Re: Dark Angel
31st Jul 2014 8:42pm
X my dear friend i so appreciate ur wonderful comment. Im so very pleased that u liked it so much
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31st Jul 2014 7:22pm
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re: Re: Dark Angel
31st Jul 2014 9:06pm
Ultra hun ty so very much. Glad u enjoyed this one. Its something different i wanted to try.
Re: Dark Angel
31st Jul 2014 7:48pm
beautiful work, w/one minor flaw: 'strength of a thousand vices' seems too harsh for the serenity of this poem. just my feeling, Belle.
as a whole, it's very captivating artistry...
as a whole, it's very captivating artistry...
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re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 5:46am
Thank you for ur input hun. The "vices" i was refering to was the tool vice grips.
Im humbled by your wonderful comment John. Thanx sovmuch
Belle
Im humbled by your wonderful comment John. Thanx sovmuch
Belle
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31st Jul 2014 8:00pm
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re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 5:50am
Honored to b classified as having a mind such as urs hun. As always i love knowing ur opinion
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Dark Angel
31st Jul 2014 10:33pm
re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 1:56pm
U r too kind Sad....means so much that u think so. Thanx darlin'
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
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1st Aug 2014 00:01am
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re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 2:00pm
As you very well know your opinion matters greatly to me. Thank you Speak for such a wonderful comment
Belle
Belle
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
1st Aug 2014 1:28am
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re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 2:02pm
Ty hun. Tried something new with this one. So happy u liked it
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 2:12am
Lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~
This poem is a masterpiece of juxtaposition. You have deftly intertwined despair and redemption, loss and salvation, scars and solace, and the war of the body with the war of the soul into this ballad of tender care (another battle, which this dark angel deftly wins).
Brava, Maestra! :-* Brava!!!
This poem is a masterpiece of juxtaposition. You have deftly intertwined despair and redemption, loss and salvation, scars and solace, and the war of the body with the war of the soul into this ballad of tender care (another battle, which this dark angel deftly wins).
Brava, Maestra! :-* Brava!!!
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re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 2:07pm
You truly humble me with your eloquent comment hun. This was a bit of an evolutional piece for me. I was quite nervous about this one. Thank you so very much
Belle
Belle
Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 6:16am
re: Re: Dark Angel
1st Aug 2014 2:10pm
Thank you Mr Vegas for sharing her opinion of this piece. Means more than u know
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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2nd Aug 2014 4:55pm
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re: Re: Dark Angel
2nd Aug 2014 9:45pm
Oak my dear friend knowing you as i do that one simple word says so very much.
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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3rd Aug 2014 4:57am
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re: Re: Dark Angel
3rd Aug 2014 5:14am