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"Elation"
She spoils me, then denies it, while giggling and knowing
She states, it is I who has spoiled her by bestowing
My hearts desire, openly spoken, for her lay bare
Hours of intimate passion and oral pleasure shared
Neither she nor I can contain the desire for showing
What we have is amazing, completely mind blowing
Her ability to give and receive, absolutely beyond compare
Mutual affection, addiction to the other, given with naught to spare
Spiritual, emotional and physical elation glowing
As if Roman Candles are forever snowing
Portrayed in our constant smiles and giddiness in the air
Illuminating our faces with delight, a most fortunate pair
*July 28, 2014*
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- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
31st Jul 2014 9:27am
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1st Aug 2014 4:36am
Re: "Elation"
31st Jul 2014 2:36pm
M VP.. you write love beautifully...expressing the complete package of spiritual, emotional, and physical desires being met by two... Love is Elating... Illuminating.. One can feel you, see you, hear your heart written within this ink. with much love and respect..YLL xoxo domore
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1st Aug 2014 4:44am
Ahh, dear Lady, your glowing sentiments are a constant
source of inspiration. Thank you for the consistent
encouragement.
It is pleasing to know you feel the message in these words.
Thanxx,
YLH
source of inspiration. Thank you for the consistent
encouragement.
It is pleasing to know you feel the message in these words.
Thanxx,
YLH
Re: "Elation"
31st Jul 2014 2:38pm
VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
I do so love this poem because it is so imbued with love it fair leaps from the page with it. After reading it, I had to double-check to see the category simply because I was so overwhelmed, luv. 'Tis simply exquisite, this expression of yours.
Thank you for sharing this with us, luv. :-*
I do so love this poem because it is so imbued with love it fair leaps from the page with it. After reading it, I had to double-check to see the category simply because I was so overwhelmed, luv. 'Tis simply exquisite, this expression of yours.
Thank you for sharing this with us, luv. :-*
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1st Aug 2014 4:56am
Ms Savaja, my sincere gratitude for your kind
and humbling remarks. Tis an honor you think it so.
You are correct. It is, "Upbeat" with a few erotic touches.
As in all things, it required a choice. :)
Appreciate you.
and humbling remarks. Tis an honor you think it so.
You are correct. It is, "Upbeat" with a few erotic touches.
As in all things, it required a choice. :)
Appreciate you.
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1st Aug 2014 5:05am
It is my deep honor and sincerest privilege to have made your acquaintance, VegasPoet, luv :-*
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Re: "Elation"
1st Aug 2014 1:29am
Browsing through tonight ... this one grabbed me.
I like how you put the thought into both the emotion and linguistic side
I like how you put the thought into both the emotion and linguistic side
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1st Aug 2014 5:17am
Thank you for reading and sharing your kind comments, coyotelover.
Welcome to DU!
Welcome to DU!
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1st Aug 2014 5:52am
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1st Aug 2014 6:58am
Oh, Sweetness. Your reaction and uplifting review are met
with deep appreciation. Thank you for sharing such praise.
xo
with deep appreciation. Thank you for sharing such praise.
xo
Re: "Elation"
1st Aug 2014 9:29am
All I can say is that it's beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! It was passionate and had a lot of feeling to it. Very well done :)
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2nd Aug 2014 2:35am
Your gratifying words are very meaningful, Ms RJ.
Thank you for taking the time to read and share such
remarkable comments. You honor and humble me.
Thank you for taking the time to read and share such
remarkable comments. You honor and humble me.
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3rd Aug 2014 2:13pm
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5th Aug 2014 00:29am
My sincere gratitude for your tender
thoughts, kitten. Your love of these
words is held in high regard.
Thank you.
xo
thoughts, kitten. Your love of these
words is held in high regard.
Thank you.
xo