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v2.1.9 (Standby)
Every new model
A little bit better than it's assembler.
Every new model
A little less human, a little bit nimbler.
A little faster, a little stronger,
But still just as demented as the last.
A little smarter, works even longer,
But still no better: it's the devil's cast.
A cast of mortals, humans drained of their person,
Just an empty shell of what "human" once meant.
A cast of mortals, people who didn't live to learn this,
Just an empty shell of a person who's been well spent.
All of these... in the palm of my hand.
Version 2.1.9, awaiting my command.
The world will never know to save themselves in time.
Standby, while communications come online.
A little bit better than it's assembler.
Every new model
A little less human, a little bit nimbler.
A little faster, a little stronger,
But still just as demented as the last.
A little smarter, works even longer,
But still no better: it's the devil's cast.
A cast of mortals, humans drained of their person,
Just an empty shell of what "human" once meant.
A cast of mortals, people who didn't live to learn this,
Just an empty shell of a person who's been well spent.
All of these... in the palm of my hand.
Version 2.1.9, awaiting my command.
The world will never know to save themselves in time.
Standby, while communications come online.
Published 27th Jul 2014
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28th Jul 2014 3:46am
This is an amazing poem - very well rhymed and the subject itself was fascinating, I am greatly looking forward to seeing what you release in future.
Hopefully Version 2.1.9 won't destroy us all before you can post another masterpiece...
Hopefully Version 2.1.9 won't destroy us all before you can post another masterpiece...
28th Jul 2014 4:19am
Humor appreciated. Lol. If you're interested in my works, you can always check out some of my older posts. One of my favorite new posts is Poison, but to see what I really like to write about, see the oldest two pages. Happy reading, if you choose to try that!
Also, thanks, very much, for the comment. It is much appreciated.
Also, thanks, very much, for the comment. It is much appreciated.
