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Check mate
Using me as a pawn in a chid's play game
Isn't what I thought would happen to me on this lovely Tuesday
Even if I wasn't your main focus I was still discussed
You used me without even talking to me
But you had much to say about gg
What's wrong with people today
I can't even post on a site without
Getting talked about as if I'm known
No one knows me, sometimes I don't even know myself
If It was your intentions to harm this man
Leave me the hell out of it I don't take well to
Females with no back bones
They can't ever say how they feel
Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me
Isn't what I thought would happen to me on this lovely Tuesday
Even if I wasn't your main focus I was still discussed
You used me without even talking to me
But you had much to say about gg
What's wrong with people today
I can't even post on a site without
Getting talked about as if I'm known
No one knows me, sometimes I don't even know myself
If It was your intentions to harm this man
Leave me the hell out of it I don't take well to
Females with no back bones
They can't ever say how they feel
Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me
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5th Apr 2011 11:21pm
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re: It's Sad
5th Apr 2011 11:22pm
Yahtzee!
5th Apr 2011 11:23pm
I enjoy this extended metaphor. I especially like the last four lines; full of command and sarcasm.
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re: Yahtzee!
5th Apr 2011 11:25pm
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5th Apr 2011 11:31pm
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re: re: re: :)
6th Apr 2011 8:22pm
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5th Apr 2011 11:35pm
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re: AS I SAID
6th Apr 2011 2:20am
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re: re: re: AS I SAID
6th Apr 2011 2:43am
I know all of this I get agitated quick and have no patients for stupidety if that how you spell it If I bust in the end that's the person on the other enda fault not mine thanks for your input
Say That!!!
Anonymous
7th Apr 2011 1:51am
"Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me"
This whole poem is centered around this theme and these are powerful words. Like one viewer said (paraphrasing) This is empowering.
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me"
This whole poem is centered around this theme and these are powerful words. Like one viewer said (paraphrasing) This is empowering.
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re: Say That!!!
im not allowed to sit on the coffe table
7th May 2011 00:15am
sinse you want honest feedback. you spelled child wrong in the first line.
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re: im not allowed to sit on the coffe table
7th May 2011 1:17am
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11th May 2011 8:44pm
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re: I would...
11th May 2011 8:46pm