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Passion
Passion is whatever the writer writes
It's in the reader as one reads
When light plays through darkness
Or in the moment of death
As a lover cries goodbye
Passion can be lace upon breasts
Twinkle in a shy girls eyes
Ringing of one's hands
Or the voice of a man
Saying goodnight to his child
Passion is what we make
It's silence in the air
And a whispered secret in a friends ear
Or a morning of peace
Lazily laying in bed
It's in the reader as one reads
When light plays through darkness
Or in the moment of death
As a lover cries goodbye
Passion can be lace upon breasts
Twinkle in a shy girls eyes
Ringing of one's hands
Or the voice of a man
Saying goodnight to his child
Passion is what we make
It's silence in the air
And a whispered secret in a friends ear
Or a morning of peace
Lazily laying in bed
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25th Jul 2014 5:30pm
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25th Jul 2014 8:01pm
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re: Re: Passion
25th Jul 2014 9:08pm
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26th Jul 2014 6:33am
Excellent Tommie! I grow more and more impressed with and passionate about every thought you leave on the page...there is wisdom in your words.
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26th Jul 2014 2:30pm
Just trying to explain what passion
can be, it's in a little bit of everything.
Good...bad...It's how we feel. And how
we respond to things. Some people can
get it, feel it, see it, touch it, taste it...some
can't. I'm glad you get it...I knew you would GW.
Thank you :)
can be, it's in a little bit of everything.
Good...bad...It's how we feel. And how
we respond to things. Some people can
get it, feel it, see it, touch it, taste it...some
can't. I'm glad you get it...I knew you would GW.
Thank you :)
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27th Jul 2014 00:25am
I agree completely. I admire your passion for nature and sensuality and how passionate you are about your friends and family. and, although I've never heard it, I hear tell, that you have a passionate laugh :)
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27th Jul 2014 4:02pm
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26th Jul 2014 9:00pm
I think this is great! I love the last two lines in particular. Passion is often thought of as felt toward others, but you capture how we have the ability to feel it on our own as well.
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27th Jul 2014 4:03pm
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