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Greedy
I'm almost naked
You touch me,there
Burn me, love
Sheets no longer clean
If there's anything left over, take that as well
Flesh before me
I touch you, there
Scorching you, love
Sheets upon the floor
Stealing kisses with my sugary lips, I take it all
You touch me,there
Burn me, love
Sheets no longer clean
If there's anything left over, take that as well
Flesh before me
I touch you, there
Scorching you, love
Sheets upon the floor
Stealing kisses with my sugary lips, I take it all
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
24th Jul 2014 12:08pm
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24th Jul 2014 7:23pm
Not bad, it's pretty ok but needs more passion but besides that it's pretty well done
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24th Jul 2014 10:34pm
loved to be touched "there"
TL...your profile pic is beautiful my friend
TL...your profile pic is beautiful my friend
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27th Jul 2014 3:57pm
Deborahlee...It's nice to hear from you again.Glad you're back. And thank you VERY much. :)
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