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Back Then
He called me hot hips
we were young filled
with wild passion
sticking together, I
lived for him, such love,
he lived for me,endless
love
That seal was made
my heart was his
world, he was my heart,
the air I breathe
the color on my cheeks
the stir inside my body
we were young filled
with wild passion
sticking together, I
lived for him, such love,
he lived for me,endless
love
That seal was made
my heart was his
world, he was my heart,
the air I breathe
the color on my cheeks
the stir inside my body
Published 23rd Jul 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
23rd Jul 2014 4:02pm
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23rd Jul 2014 4:22pm
We still have it we're just not young anymore.
And that delicious sweet corn still gets stuck
in my teeth lol
Thank you Poet :)
And that delicious sweet corn still gets stuck
in my teeth lol
Thank you Poet :)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 5:40pm
23rd Jul 2014 4:41pm
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23rd Jul 2014 6:34pm
23rd Jul 2014 5:40pm
Reminiscing the early years when all was excitingly new. I do this too. Good write.
23rd Jul 2014 6:35pm
23rd Jul 2014 6:33pm
I believe every word!!
You're all that plus tax sweets!!
Great read!
Sir Lancelott
You're all that plus tax sweets!!
Great read!
Sir Lancelott
23rd Jul 2014 6:36pm
23rd Jul 2014 7:03pm
hot lips? ... Makes me think of Hot Lips Houlihan of MASH fame ... another no nonsense blond .. cool.
23rd Jul 2014 8:02pm
lol so did my sis ... Who's a no nonsense lady in her own right. She also loved Angie Dickinson as Pepper.
23rd Jul 2014 10:13pm