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Why do you hide it?
He hid heaven in your heart
hid it there for all to see
tucked it away inside
inside of you,for you and me
made it your choice,
to bring it out
let it free
to hide no more.
It's all there
for you to share,
heaven is in your heart.
hid it there for all to see
tucked it away inside
inside of you,for you and me
made it your choice,
to bring it out
let it free
to hide no more.
It's all there
for you to share,
heaven is in your heart.
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Re: Why do you hide it?
22nd Jul 2014 4:35pm
"He hid heaven in your heart
hid it there for all to see" [nice play with opposite words]
heaven in one's heart... [so lovely]
@EngrVV
hid it there for all to see" [nice play with opposite words]
heaven in one's heart... [so lovely]
@EngrVV
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22nd Jul 2014 5:16pm
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23rd Jul 2014 00:22am
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22nd Jul 2014 10:46pm
it's like, the things I find tucked
away in my pockets..:)
great poem, Hash...
away in my pockets..:)
great poem, Hash...
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23rd Jul 2014 4:16am
My friend, this is lovely!
Let the love, and serenity within, be your
heart-shine...to light the pathways for all those who walk in the darkness.
Inspiring Ink!
Let the love, and serenity within, be your
heart-shine...to light the pathways for all those who walk in the darkness.
Inspiring Ink!
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