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As I Watched~
You caught my eye
In your nakedness
You were truly
Beautiful
Your veil was
Lifted
I watched you as
You drank the
Sweetness from
The center
While the wind
Gently pushed you
Both back and
Forth
You danced together
Gracefully
As I watched
In your nakedness
You were truly
Beautiful
Your veil was
Lifted
I watched you as
You drank the
Sweetness from
The center
While the wind
Gently pushed you
Both back and
Forth
You danced together
Gracefully
As I watched
Published 22nd Jul 2014
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- Edited 16th May 2018 5:40pm
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22nd Jul 2014 3:20pm
There's beauty everywhere. We live life fast. Most
times never slowing down for the simple things.
I've learned to pace myself, relax and soak it all in.
I'm glad you liked this Jack_Tex..As I told you before,
I appreciate your comments.
times never slowing down for the simple things.
I've learned to pace myself, relax and soak it all in.
I'm glad you liked this Jack_Tex..As I told you before,
I appreciate your comments.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
22nd Jul 2014 3:54pm
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22nd Jul 2014 4:43pm
The romance between a butterfly and a flower was vividly caught in your poetic web with such beautiful weaving of words. As a nature lover like me, I love the soothing image it brings!
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
22nd Jul 2014 5:20pm
Anonymous
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22nd Jul 2014 6:51pm
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22nd Jul 2014 8:45pm
You're too kind seascape. Your words are always appreciated my dear. Thank you very much. :)
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