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Sometimes the Demons come...
Sometimes
The Demons come
They
Won't be swayed
Allayed
Immovable, impenetrable
Penetrating me over and over and over and over and over and willitneverfucking end?
Starting so
Young (they like tender flesh - sweet
S u c c u l e n t) toldmethemselves yes they did
Secrets they have to impart
They'll teach you many
Oh! You're unwilling? No matter
Still you'll learn
Yes
You'll learn well
Lessons
Stamped IN your flesh ON your soul
Imprinted
Don't want you to forget
Not in this life
Perhaps the next (pray the next Pray the next PRAY the next)
Sometimes the Demons come
Sometimes you win the round
Still you emerge battered, bloody, bruised, borderline once again, battling your mind
At odds with your body
Deep in your hell...
The Demons come
They
Won't be swayed
Allayed
Immovable, impenetrable
Penetrating me over and over and over and over and over and willitneverfucking end?
Starting so
Young (they like tender flesh - sweet
S u c c u l e n t) toldmethemselves yes they did
Secrets they have to impart
They'll teach you many
Oh! You're unwilling? No matter
Still you'll learn
Yes
You'll learn well
Lessons
Stamped IN your flesh ON your soul
Imprinted
Don't want you to forget
Not in this life
Perhaps the next (pray the next Pray the next PRAY the next)
Sometimes the Demons come
Sometimes you win the round
Still you emerge battered, bloody, bruised, borderline once again, battling your mind
At odds with your body
Deep in your hell...
Published 19th Jul 2014
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21st Jul 2014 00:04am
Thank you, Jack, luv :-* ~
Demon is, indeed, a profound concept. I comprehend your discomfort with potential religious overtones, however for me, in this context, the use is apropos, which you astutely ascertain as usual.
You have given me a gift of measureless price and I will endeavor to use it judiciously and flagrantly, luv :-*. You have made something looming and immense somehow diminished, turned it askew and reduced its power, its threat. I know not precisely how. It almost matters not; what matters most is that you have done this for me.
Do, come kiss these my silently screaming lips that you hear so well with your oh so restless lips... :-*
Demon is, indeed, a profound concept. I comprehend your discomfort with potential religious overtones, however for me, in this context, the use is apropos, which you astutely ascertain as usual.
You have given me a gift of measureless price and I will endeavor to use it judiciously and flagrantly, luv :-*. You have made something looming and immense somehow diminished, turned it askew and reduced its power, its threat. I know not precisely how. It almost matters not; what matters most is that you have done this for me.
Do, come kiss these my silently screaming lips that you hear so well with your oh so restless lips... :-*
20th Jul 2014 9:14pm
21st Jul 2014 00:09am
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21st Jul 2014 8:50am
Thank you, kateA, luv :-*.
This was a very tough piece to voice. If it were not for a very special someone insisting upon it, I would not have done so. Catharsis begins to come in many ways, curiously enough...
Thank you, again, for your kind and thoughtful words, luv. :-*
This was a very tough piece to voice. If it were not for a very special someone insisting upon it, I would not have done so. Catharsis begins to come in many ways, curiously enough...
Thank you, again, for your kind and thoughtful words, luv. :-*
22nd Jul 2014 4:35pm
22nd Jul 2014 6:19pm
22nd Jul 2014 9:41pm
Well penned, Savaja.
Demons, issues, difficulties, baggage, however one labels, we all have them.
Whether they lurk in the shadows, acknowledged and beaten into submission with positive energy. Or, glaring in our face from the occasional inability to defend with apt fortitude. They must be confronted.
The key. Choose to be the victor, never the victim.
Demons, issues, difficulties, baggage, however one labels, we all have them.
Whether they lurk in the shadows, acknowledged and beaten into submission with positive energy. Or, glaring in our face from the occasional inability to defend with apt fortitude. They must be confronted.
The key. Choose to be the victor, never the victim.
22nd Jul 2014 10:00pm
Thank you, VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
Yes, we do all have our trials by fire, do we not?
And, confrontation is crucial; such a key facet, that choice piece, isn't it? We get to choose, ultimately, so very many things in life. That is something to hold onto for, even if there were times we did not get to choose; well, for every single one of those times, there are times we DO get to choose and THAT, well that is truly, incredibly, ineluctably powerful, isn't it, luv? :-*
Thank you for reminding me of that so irrevocable truth! :-* Thank you, VegasPoet, you sweet Dom, you! :-*
Yes, we do all have our trials by fire, do we not?
And, confrontation is crucial; such a key facet, that choice piece, isn't it? We get to choose, ultimately, so very many things in life. That is something to hold onto for, even if there were times we did not get to choose; well, for every single one of those times, there are times we DO get to choose and THAT, well that is truly, incredibly, ineluctably powerful, isn't it, luv? :-*
Thank you for reminding me of that so irrevocable truth! :-* Thank you, VegasPoet, you sweet Dom, you! :-*
Ah demons I have many. I read Jack's response and for me the demons are not my problems but rather my habits some of which may be demonized unfairly. Do I have problems that stem from my demons, of course. Some may say, actually most will say, if they read my erotic poetry, that it is a thing of the head of all demons. Perhaps that is true but why do these ideas come to me fully formed, ready to flow from my mind in such a beautiful presentation?
You have elicited much thought from me with this piece...a perfect scribe, in my estimation.
You have elicited much thought from me with this piece...a perfect scribe, in my estimation.
6th Aug 2014 11:50pm
Thank you, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-* ~
Demons may be many things, ne c'est pas?
They haunt us each in myriad ways and change their form at times...
Oft-times, some say that which is most beautiful can be most destructive... Can that also be beneficial in the end? What an uncomfortable and difficult concept that is! I know not. I only pose queries, luv.
Demons may be many things, ne c'est pas?
They haunt us each in myriad ways and change their form at times...
Oft-times, some say that which is most beautiful can be most destructive... Can that also be beneficial in the end? What an uncomfortable and difficult concept that is! I know not. I only pose queries, luv.
7th Aug 2014 00:00am
Ay Ay Ay! That is one scary concept. Especially when you consider all of the geniuses of the fine arts who were crazy. It is a tough balancing act and I hope I never have to choose between my art and other things and people I love.
8th Aug 2014 2:46pm
Beautifully read. Emotive audio that breathes life into the words.
Scared hell outta me...
Scared hell outta me...
8th Aug 2014 4:07pm
Thank you, Atakti, luv, but I do not know that I deserve a great deal of credit for a beautiful reading. It was a vastly difficult thing, which I would not have done without prodding. :-p