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Modesty
Everything in front of me is still.
The foreground is:
warm, loud and you.
You show me the pleasure
of all that is homeostatic.
I am nestled in your being/
a bio-dome of lovely creation.
In this, only we, exist,
only you exist.
From a modest place I say,
"This is what love looks like"
The foreground is:
warm, loud and you.
You show me the pleasure
of all that is homeostatic.
I am nestled in your being/
a bio-dome of lovely creation.
In this, only we, exist,
only you exist.
From a modest place I say,
"This is what love looks like"
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19th Jul 2014 3:49am
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19th Jul 2014 4:59am
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Calm serene peaceful words.
Great write.
Your words mirror your current situation perfrctly.
Keep it up!
Great write.
Your words mirror your current situation perfrctly.
Keep it up!
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19th Jul 2014 5:00am
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19th Jul 2014 6:39am
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19th Jul 2014 7:29am
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19th Jul 2014 8:52pm
Thanks Jack. You interprets my writing so well. You seem connected to it. I love the support.
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19th Jul 2014 6:42pm
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19th Jul 2014 8:51pm
Re: Modesty
20th Jul 2014 1:16pm
If that's what love looks like then I'm sure
I have yet to see it but I thank you for
defining it so beautifully my dear lady :)
Brava!
I have yet to see it but I thank you for
defining it so beautifully my dear lady :)
Brava!
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20th Jul 2014 4:03pm
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7th Aug 2014 7:06pm
The bubble of love. A beautiful place created by the love between two. Good write Scarlett.
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