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travel in emptiness
travel in emptiness seems only being a voyage to explore
some who imagine to reach nirvana keep being stricktly selfish
but who minds?
travel,nirvana,punkrock,etc..
arent these days something else than apparitions of fashion?..
and you, rabid poet still have as your predilection -swarming with beau monde!!
whom trust, whom with labor? whose hearts to break?
i say you, dollface
take it easy and dont try ever investigate anything skeptical
for heaven's sake dont be subversive!
for in-word is „ENJOY“ while „FIGHT AGAINST“..is for underdogs and imbeciles..
some who imagine to reach nirvana keep being stricktly selfish
but who minds?
travel,nirvana,punkrock,etc..
arent these days something else than apparitions of fashion?..
and you, rabid poet still have as your predilection -swarming with beau monde!!
whom trust, whom with labor? whose hearts to break?
i say you, dollface
take it easy and dont try ever investigate anything skeptical
for heaven's sake dont be subversive!
for in-word is „ENJOY“ while „FIGHT AGAINST“..is for underdogs and imbeciles..
Published 17th Jul 2014
| Edited 25th Jul 2014
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18th Jul 2014 5:07am
19th Jul 2014 3:50pm
aye! love it <3 ..... be warned. you are [be]coming upon a 'peculiar wisdom' that is widely disappreciated,
(though beautiful in a nondualistic & somewhat painful manner)
20th Jul 2014 6:03pm
have been warned.. though i am really so far from realising wisdom like astronom is far from the stars, which he is so much yearn to explore..
<3
25th Jul 2014 2:29am
the fuctup eternally striving modern tragic romantic. you are making it sound good so far. in reality, i hate this poem so much i have to respect it.
25th Jul 2014 6:30am
alas, i have less clue what is modern tragic romantic..and yah, it is senile scribble,just repaired it a littl, but no use..for i hate it too,many thanks for yer reflection. and reading of course..