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Eight (7)
1 ah there you are yes you
my mighty bull
white raging bull
2 upon whose horns I sit
my toes on your nose
you tickle me!
3 you yes you
my frisky dragon
burning your breakfast
while eating!
4 let's dance the fire
on your tongue
let us drink wine!
5 ah there you are yes
you my dear Neptune
6 the pearl of my aching loins
7 I am the nymph on your breasts
oh let me suckle!
8 let us swim to the navel
of the sea!
Published 17th Jul 2014
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17th Jul 2014 2:43pm
I want to have a problem with the numbering on these things, because i dont "get" it, but i dont. There is nice rhythm through each, a continuous voice that offers interesting slivers of the narrators perspective... Have enjoyed each of these ate pieces, this one twinkles particularly bright for me
thanks for the reads
thanks for the reads
18th Jul 2014 4:13pm
Thank you lightbaron!
I've learned that if I don't 'get it' in a piece of literature (or any art), it is now a matter of "against interpretation" (Susan Sontag) - where an erotics, rather than a hermeneutics, of art takes place. Your comment expresses that perfectly! Thank you so much for the read/comment.
I've learned that if I don't 'get it' in a piece of literature (or any art), it is now a matter of "against interpretation" (Susan Sontag) - where an erotics, rather than a hermeneutics, of art takes place. Your comment expresses that perfectly! Thank you so much for the read/comment.
17th Jul 2014 8:41pm
18th Jul 2014 4:16pm